Um começo muito interessante.... a curiosidade fica no ar... e o leitor quer saber mais.... perfeito. Parabéns.
Compelling opening, and I look forward to reading more. One does tend to feel badly about Marian, though :)
Finally I get to see how Guy meet Cassie :) your work is amazing , I love them and you shouldn really think about publishing them
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Yes. Yes this will most certainly be good. I nearly grinned my face off when I saw your profile picture was Guy off of the TV series. I love that show.
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