Cover is pretty intriguing which is good. Paragraph spacing is great too ;D Nice prologue. Definitely something that will catch reader's eyes. :d
It's really intriguing and makes you want to read more! Luckily, you already put up more chapters so I can when I get the time :D
This is very good! I didn't see any grammar errors, so kudos on that :D This is intriguing. I like it :) Voted
Great beginning! Very intriguing! Can't wait to see where the story goes. It sounds like it will be good!
Tis actually scared me :S but then again i'm scared easily. But yeah, i like how you brought awareness of these cases... great way to pull in your readers :)
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