I usually don't like a story from the first chapter, but for some reason {this is good} I really like this, going to read more
coool. im also writing a novel about magic,demons,gods,demigods and so forth. i just started though. if interested check out my profile for my work.
Sounds like a really interesting world! Verity sounds as if shes gonna be a laugh love her last line!
I liked this, it was very well written :) so much so that I didn't really mind the info dump. Voted!
A few grammar mistakes but otherwise great! Very unique. You have good detail and word choice I'm excited to read on!
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