Careful Icarus, for the sun is hottest at it's zenith and the ripples end when they meet the shore. The words "I can" rings loudest, when we ask why for. Great piece of inspirational writing. Sounds like your up for the challenge. "
I have no need to be hesitant Daedalus! I shall acquire this monster Sol and you shall all see, what an illusion the Sun can be. Maybe your ripples end at the shore, being nothing more. But mines, repetitious with ease, will keep until the "I cannot" has ceased.
LOVED YOUR REMARK (or insult) It was very clever and original! ^^
:) WHAT SOMEONE REPLIED TO MY POEM(on another site), THOUGHT I SHOULD SHARE WITH YOU ALL