Icarus-Incarnation

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challenge647 By challenge647 Completed
DIVOT
    Careful Icarus, for the sun is hottest at it's zenith and the ripples end when they meet the shore. The words "I can" rings loudest, when we ask why for. Great piece of inspirational writing. Sounds like your up for the challenge. "
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     CHALLENGE647
    I have no need to be hesitant Daedalus! I shall acquire this monster Sol and you shall all see, what an illusion the Sun can be. Maybe your ripples end at the shore, being nothing more. But mines, repetitious with ease, will keep until the "I cannot" has ceased.
    
    LOVED YOUR REMARK (or insult)  It was very clever and original! ^^
    
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    :) WHAT SOMEONE REPLIED TO MY POEM(on another site), THOUGHT I SHOULD SHARE WITH YOU ALL
This is very mythical and mystically dreamy to me. Its just so whimsical and lighthearted and enlightening and the visuals are so exciting! This was superb.
This poem is really unique and I love greek mythology so I guess that's why I was 'blown away'. Anyway, the words were really used well and I loved the words you used. I can see you're inspired here so well done :D
This is great work! The old English and the depth of the meaning really amazes me. I love the fact that you've used so many poetic devices in here....lovely! Well done =D
i did enjoy this poem but not as much as others but still good :)
That was great. I love anyhing that has to do with Icarus. So whimsical.
your second last stanza is very effective.  strong closing line too.  ~)K