I love the rhyme scheme and imagery of this, I could see it all in my mind! Your word choice was great too, and added a lot to the poem. Voted :D
I just love hearing you read the poems. Makes it that much better hearing it in the writers voice. This was amazing.
ouch! Nomads of heart cannot but part' exquisite visual imagery...Will i vote? I think yes
Very beautiful. I like your use of words and metaphors. I read it more than once for the feel.
It is magical to experience these types of conversations... connections made when hearts and minds are open to the dance of discovery...lovely work.
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| Name | Strider Marcus Jones |
| Location | Lothlorien |
| Member Since | Jul 30, 2010 |
| Votes Received | 840 |