Oh my gosh, that is sooo good! I especially like the description and word choice, and theres nothing ik that u can improve on!
The ideas was very original.It was very well written.Each and every thing was well described.It was just beautiful.Keep up the good work :)
Wow! This is awesome! Thanks so much for entering! You describe things so well! In the short time, you made their relationship so unique, I loved it!
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