I liked it a lot. I don't like her dad much but you really can't choose your parents. :P
I first read it in quizilla n then when I saw the link i quickly opened it and put ur story in my reading list cuz its plain amazing!!
HMMMMM I am really liking this THe diviousness is somthing I can get used to! Great job!
great topic. you can really write alot about all this. good choice, your sentences flow really well.
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