Action-packed and exciting. I noticed one particular error with the tense used, though. Aside from that, I really find the rest of the story great. :)
Just how I like it. Exciting, with guns, and action. Oh and there is a certain degree of honor in an apocalypse. Not much, but some. Maybe... O-0'...
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