Ps I love the whole bat thing it makes me happy inside that and I fangirl like every five minutes
I think it could be a really good story plot! -- Just make sure to put more twists into it. ;)
I Already know I'm going to like reading this story.Even though I love werewolf stories I'm really into this one.This is like the best prologue I read yet.
To be frank, I am not into vampires but your descriptions were immaculate. You really know how to create a brill hook.
Looks quite interesting, will continue reading! hooking, impressive and I love the descriptions.
Impressive start. First sentence is very hooking and you kept my attention throughout.
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