Yeah, there were a few grammatical errors, but overall it had a lot more detail than some other HG Fanfics I have seen here. I think you should continue :D
Wow! This is wonderfully amazing! I love the detail, and how well th characters are made..Cant wait for an upload! :D
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| Name | Call me Riley!! :) |
| Location | Narnia |
| Birthday | Jul 01 |
| Member Since | Jan 22, 2012 |
| Votes Received | 33 |