Only through pain can we find happiness.
Excellent introduction to the character; I love how clear her voice comes through, so sad.
Great! I really found this interesting. :) There were no grammatical errors, whatsoever. It was nice. :>
;___; That's too sad. Yet it happens to so many people. Anyway, great detail and writing. I enjoyed this alot. I'm excited to see more developments(: I'm worried that the women might go crazy but maybe not! Update soon!
Man that is one emotional opening! I really have nothing else to say, very sad!
wow this seriously made my cry, I feel bad for her. Her partner is UUUGH I want to punch Shelly in the face!
Wow, a lot of emotions mixed into one, this was a good chapter