13 Part Story 1.8K Reads 64 Votes
_ohthreelove By _ohthreelove Updated a year ago
One should never leave a child locked up in a room.
RukawaHolmes RukawaHolmes 3 years ago
Wow. Wow. Wow. Wow. Wow.

This was just... Scary. And sad.


Will move on, can't give a long comment yet. Will make up by giving an extra comment. ;)
SinixCyni SinixCyni 3 years ago
love it i will read more after school is out it draws u in a creepy way i love it
mwaaah_kisses95 mwaaah_kisses95 3 years ago
Okay. Creepy-Michael Myers type creepy. lol. But its enticing. I wonder why they killed her though. And her mother's just...cruel! Standing by and watching your daughter get electrocuted, that's just inhuman.
riotXdancer riotXdancer 3 years ago
What in the world?! I can already tell this is going to be an interesting story.
Great start! Excellent hook.
zozolovesxoxo zozolovesxoxo 3 years ago
I think it's really scary :// I dont read thrillers a lot, but this one totally hooked me:)
YaMujahadah YaMujahadah 3 years ago
OK, that was spooky! I wonder why the little girl is strapped to the chair. Moving on and voted! :)