Into The Moon (Book one) ........(First few chapters need serious editing)

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leighxxx By leighxxx Updated 2 years ago
Abby Grace is a normal seventeen year old girl, well normal in the sense that she wants to meet a guy, make some friends and be like all the other "normal" kids..... Abbys problem is her dad's dead and her mom's an alcoholic and moves her around a lot, a hell of a lot. At least now her Aunt has stepped in to help and keep her settled . Abby hopes and dreams might just come true........ but then again Abby has never done anything the easy way.....
hey guys the first few chapters on this story arent brilliant due to laptop and net problems so they had to be done on my phone. but please keep reading it gets so much better..............
barbie23 barbie23 3 years ago
@barbie23 because its wicked good. Never would have thougjt it was your first.
HoneybeeS HoneybeeS 3 years ago
I love the use of descriptions and enjoyed reading this chater very much although it was a little short
xxxMariri555 xxxMariri555 3 years ago
Hmm this was a little short for a prologue, but I liked it. There were a few grammar errors (i.e; i sighed again) You should capitalize the "i" haha. Other then that, I liked it(: I don't usually read werewolf stories, but I'll give this one a try. Voted! :3
ilybabelol ilybabelol 3 years ago
I'm kind of confused sorry, it was really short and u need to fix up your grammar but it was really interesting! Id like to find out more about whats actually happening, and if Abby has a good day at her new school! lol good job, sorry to be harsh though :(
The_MarySue The_MarySue 3 years ago
@leighxxx hahaha ;) well this is a link to her profile and I'll tell her I sent ya to her <3 shes really good ;D 
http://www.wattpad.com/user/crosscatch
The_MarySue The_MarySue 3 years ago
I LOVEEEEEEEE WEREWOLFIES they are scrumptious ;) Aside from that, your story has beautiful potentail, BUT it needs editing ;) no offense. So, I'd be happy to direct you to my editor ;) If you want of course