Mind Freak

29 Part Story 34.8K Reads 1.2K Votes
catchingangels By catchingangels Updated 5 months ago
Aubrey is transferring from the comfort of her well-known Catholic school to a boarding school across the country because of a mishap with the school's "Popular Girl."  She thinks that being sent away, she's being punished for her actions, but that's not entirely the case. She notices that the students and faculty of Hillside Academy aren't like anyone else she's met before, and that they seem to possess strange powers. Maybe even as strange as hers, even though she refuses to admit it.
As she settles in, she starts to see that people are going missing, and that's definitely not normal. Are her and her classmates in serious danger? Will she be able to overcome her fear of her powers and use them to protect herself and her friends?
self_conscious self_conscious 5 months ago
Ty for posting this upfront. I don't wanna b rude pointing things out, I wanna b helpful. :)
AlexMcGilvery AlexMcGilvery 2 years ago
I like that you dump us into the action. I wonder do you give a little too much away for a prologue, but you got me to click to the second page.  That means you get my second page award.
RabiaSadaat RabiaSadaat 3 years ago
you hooked me into this immediately, my favourite/funniest part would be 'the gym exploded' lol, its really great plot and i didn't spot any mistakes, great job! Voted. :)
ii4oo49 ii4oo49 3 years ago
this is very intriguing! it's written very well and makes the reader want to know what's gonna happen next!
KawiiLawliiPop KawiiLawliiPop 3 years ago
C: i love your simple writing~ It's so clear and crisp~ like a breath of fresh air~ Im not gonna lie. . . I LOL'ed at "And then the gym exploded" xD
slantingwillow slantingwillow 3 years ago
W.O.W. This was amazing! You reeled me in immediately! This was so well-written! I love it :D I'm adding this to my library!