ON HOLD Perfect Picture ON HOLD

13 Part Story 2.7K Reads 78 Votes
Moriah2Hot By Moriah2Hot Updated 3 years ago
Darren and Taylor have been friends since kindergarten.  They both like each other but don't know it.  Let's get it straight Darren is popular Taylor is a nerd.  Darren doesn't want to be seen with well... you know... a nerd.  Let's see what happens!!!
moosechester moosechester 3 years ago
It's good, but the smiley faces don't belong in the story, so I suggest you take them out. That's all I've got. Great start!
momamoose momamoose 3 years ago
it's good, bot not my preferred kind of story, sorry, I voted because I know if I liked Romance stories I'd like it