Crazy Sexy Cool : Big Bad Mafia Boy Series 1 #Wattys2014

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Athena_Heart By Athena_Heart Updated 3 days ago
The Italian mafia rules. For decades, the rules have remained the same. An eye for an eye, a tooth for a tooth. 
His world was one of lust, lies and maybe love. Fearless and ruthless, Dean Bishop terrified her. Commanded. Wanting nothing but her. He will make her his. No matter the cost.
Fiery, feisty and unforgettable, Elena Cruz is a sexy drug that Dean craves endlessly. 
But in this world where money and power consume everyone, enemies abound. There is a price on her head. 
Against all odds, Dean wants to protect her. Will he be able to, even as she continues to keep her distance from him? What would it take to change Elena's heart towards Dean? A red hot tale of desires rolls out the red carpet for you to enter...
chubbas chubbas 11 days ago
Amazing chapter.....You're a really good writer!!! Love this book!!!
AmberRose007 AmberRose007 5 months ago
The reasons for this and that are explained clearly without a major shift in the scene. So Dean has been wanting but hasn't been allowed by Nonno. And worst, Elena doesn't want him. Quite a conflict of interests here.
AmberRose007 AmberRose007 5 months ago
I like the way you introduce the characters. The story flows naturally without a break when you introduce the characters. I, particularly like this convo between Dean and Elena. With the tension given between them, there is already an establishment something is wrong in this relationship.
AmberRose007 AmberRose007 5 months ago
Very interesting opening paragraph. I like how you subtly included details about the character amidst describing the scene.
DangerouslyCreative DangerouslyCreative 10 months ago
Y is he sleeping with other women when elena is there? Cany u giv him som self resepct?
ShakeiraKeirieSands ShakeiraKeirieSands 10 months ago
Well you can't really improve on perfection but you can try. Love it!