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Poem written about my childhood sweetheart,i have held alot back on this as it was a 32 line competition,soon i will put the whole thing up,if you would like that of course....
Wow....very well written. Very good.
And what shocks me is I have no criticism...none..that rarely ever happens *claps*
Well done. But we shall see what lies ahead with the next poem I will read.
Beautiful, lovely and incredibly written. Loved your descriptions and how it read like a story. Well, well done.
This is a really lovely poem I really liked the last stanza :)
Excellent! Tells the story, and a nice ryhme. If this was longer once, then yes, tell it whole. Voted.