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12 Part Story 303K Reads 9.3K Votes
farawayfromnowhere By farawayfromnowhere Updated 19 days ago
Caroline King's dad is gone. She's depressed. She's consumed in grief and guilt. She's drowning underneath it all. And then suddenly, she is very literally drowning in the ocean, and then she finds herself encouraging the water to keep abusing her, encouraging it to keep her down under. She's drowning and she's okay with it. Until her plan of drowning is foiled when a boy jumps into the sea and saves her. And he's got some secrets of his own, and he's not going to share those anytime soon. It's up to Caroline to figure those out all on her own.
hebserella hebserella 2 months ago
you describe everything is such vast and amazing detail! it's amazing!
cookieangel11 cookieangel11 4 months ago
Great description of the pain she is feeling, it was written beautifully! You write with talent and your heart:)
Enjoyed the first chapter well done!!
RainWhisker RainWhisker 8 months ago
This is great! I love how you conveyed the emotions. And how you started this chapter. I feel like this is going to be one amazing journey.
crookedtooth crookedtooth a year ago
you describe everything so elegantly with this huge melancholy feel to it and it's so beautiful
i love your writing so much don't ever stop
huvuls huvuls a year ago
Yay! Keep on updating! Especially never have I ever! I love that story
IdReadThat IdReadThat a year ago
I really like this!!like I don't even know why other than the details in the story are great. Wonderful start.