Scarred Love (On Hold)

14 Part Story 6.2K Reads 151 Votes
_kanvamplover By _kanvamplover Updated 2 years ago


                    

                    
GhoStGirl606 GhoStGirl606 2 years ago
this sounds like an interesting, bitter-sweet love story :) i enjoyed it, but it seemed a bit choppy. like, it wasnt flowing in my mind while reading. but otherwise kwl ^^,
GhoStGirl606 GhoStGirl606 2 years ago
at the bottom of page one where ur describing her eyes, i thnk you spelled 'brey' instead of 'grey' ;P