Can you help me with a title? Pretty please?

So I need help with a title (obviously) I haven't got it up yet but am in the process of starting it

This is a sci fi (wow, I'm all for the obvious today) and horror story :D

What it's about:

Scientists have managed to make the 'perfect human' the thing is these 'perfect humans' are only about 10% human, the rest machine. So when they kill their creators and manage to create more of themselves (this part is a bit fuzzy so bear with me here) and somehow they think it's a good idea to blend in with the humans (Yeah, still not sure how that part is to work out yet...keep in mind these things are malicious and evil) They blend in perfectly with the human race, and other than a select few know of their existence...and that's pretty much were I'm at now... And the story is centered on one girl who's father was one of the scientists to create these monsters...

So I also need help with the name of the machine things... I was kind of hoping for it to be a word were each letter starts a word (like p.e.t.a, but an actual word) although if you have a better idea i am all ears, I was also thinking that maybe the title could be the same as what the machines are called but I'm open for anything.

Would you guys even read a story like this? I don't have much worked out, they Idea just came to me when I was watching transformers 3 (best movie ever by the way) last night...don't ask me why transformers inspired this, it just did...

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Seriously? Why doesn't it show everything?

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So I need help with a title (obviously) I haven't got it up yet but am in the process of starting it

This is a sci fi (wow, I'm all for the obvious today) and horror story :D

What it's about:

Scientists have managed to make the 'perfect human' the thing is these 'perfect humans' are only about 10% human, the rest machine. So when they kill their creators and manage to create more of themselves (this part is a bit fuzzy so bear with me here) and somehow they think it's a good idea to blend in with the humans (Yeah, still not sure how that

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Can you guys read any of that?

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@neuroticme13 i'll help out lol gimme a minute

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@neuroticme13 Well it cut you off again! lol but i'm thinking it should be something like Perfect Human, or Creation Killer, or 10% Human, 90% Destroyor (taking out the percents Human Destroyer)

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@xer0blaze I'll keep that in mind :)

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FIXED IT!!

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You got the title yourself - 'The Perfect Human'. It has a nice ring to it. Either that or keep it something simple like 'Flawless' - words synonymous with 'perfect' have to be a part of your title as it relates very heavily to your story. Or even 'Ten Percent'.

As for them infiltrating human society - well, maybe they want to undermine human society? Or plant themselves into high ranking positons in the military and government as to be able to gain influence and control over humanity? It's an obvious and powerful choice to go with.

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"Perfection?" with or without question mark. "Artifical Human(s)". "Metalic Society", "Jump In The Machine Direction". "Perfect, In Everyway"

As for the robots. Mabye they want to exterminate the human race to create a new species of "Improved Humans"

As for the names of the things, C.A.H.- Cybernetical Advance Homosapien

XD i tried XD

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Maybe something like, "The Human Percentage" for the title. The acronym you can use for these cyborgs could be something like CALs, Cybernetic Actualized Lifeforms. Maybe they want to infiltrate humanity so that they may repopulate and one day take over the Earth.

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"The Human Percentage" is a good title - love it.

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Creation

Last breath

The price of perfection

The hidden

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10% Perfection

90% Mistakes

90% Perfection

10% Mistakes.

You get the picture.

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only 10% us

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How about Almost Perfect, or Close to Perfection. Sorry these suck xDD

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"Create, Kill, Destroy"

"Not So Perfect Anymore"

"Humanity at War

These are the titles I came up with~Hope they help

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What about "Replica"?

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@neuroticme13 how about "The Perfects" or "Making Perfection"? Or you could do "Perfect Disguise".

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Well...turns out I accidently took this off my subscribed threads thingy...But thank you to all who helped me :)

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C.L.O.N.E. (Cybernetic Life-form Optimized Neural Engine) ? And I would read it.

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@neuroticme13 for titles how about something like Imperfection or The Price of Perfection.

As for what you could call them, I'm not sure, let me have a think! The one above is pretty good though ^^

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@AzraelProgenyOfWrath I like that each letter stands for something! That's what I was originally thinking of doing...I just couldn't think of what word to use...

I'm not entirely sure if I'm going to do this, I was thinking of doing a doppelganger story instead, but you guys got me excited about this story idea again...

@Narivah I like "The Price Of Perfection"...

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@bibliophilefreak I believe "The Perfects" Is already a book by scott westerfield...Or maybe it's "The Pretties"...I can't remember...

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its Pretties!! lol

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