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Il comment, review, your work I'm not an editor, but i like to comment I prefer teen fiction, horror,mystery,adult but il review anything really xD

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Hello, if you are still interested in commenting on work I would love for you to review mine. @Elsceey4321

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@Elsceey4321, Hi =) I'm beginning a mystery series if you're interested? The series itself is called The Manhattan Skyline Mysteries, and Book One is called Pick Your Poison. I'm in the middle of writing Book Two, Clear Waters Rising. I hope you enjoy =D

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@aspiringauthor91 @The_Angel_Entertains Yes am still interested thanks 4 posting xD

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@aspiringauthor91 Wat story?

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If ur interested, check out the link http://www.wattpad.com/forums/discussion/248195/want-to-interview-recommend.-no-catch/#Item_4

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hey there, @Elsceey4321 i have just started this one but would you be interested in commenting the title is fated I would love for you to review mine and tell me what you think. i'm sorry if it bad i just took up writing for fun thank you in advance

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Yeah il comment xD @alexander2583

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My story, here is the link: http://www.wattpad.com/5607107-the-symbol-of-my-life-chapter-1@Elsceey4321

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Please comment :)

Title: An Impeccable Catastrophe

Summary: A martial artist is the best in her class. Because of her skills she is fearless; nothing and no one can scare her. While staying out late one night, she gets attacked and her defense is put to the test. But no matter how great you are at karate, it doesn't compare to a gun against your head. Annabeth has no choice, but to follow and obey her attacker, Eli. He is creating a gang and is forcing others to join. With Annabeth's skills, she stands out above the rest. Eli is attracted to her and can't help but want her to be the second in command. His leading lady. Will Annabeth join his gang or use all of her strength to escape?

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I'd enjoy a comment!

Title: Make Me A Cinderella

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1646552-make-me-a-cinderella

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@Elsceey4321 http://www.wattpad.com/story/1622011-love-me Shaniece, "Niecie" for short, was abused by her first boyfriend when she was just 16. She killed him to save her life and later found out she was pregnant with his child. Six years later she is a single mother trying to provide for her daughter, when she meets a man. Forever scarred, How can she love again, when she isn't sure what love is?

http://www.wattpad.com/5214802-the-deadwood-enemies-chapter-1 action packed. vampires. fae and witches.

plz read and comment and maybe vote!!

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/918337-the-memoir-man

Thank you! This is horror, by the way! :)

This story entails just that: stories. Stories of lives. Stories of freedom. A lone quill scrawls the stories of all the lives in the universe. This is how it always has been, and how it always should be. Until now.

Cassius Moon is alone in this world. With his mother dead, and the rest of the population shunning him, he has nothing to live for–expect for his ingenious mind. Solving problems, curing diseases, and thinking up conspiracies against the human race are just average ideas that cross his mind. Cassius Moon is content with living a hollow and empty life, until he happens across the one thing his mother left him–a letter. It explains what she believed when she was murdered–and also why everyone thought she was insane. She tells him someone is coming for Cassius, that he must run. The Master is coming for him–a godlike figure that looms over all, scrawling their every decision and choice onto a scroll. She tells him The Master controls us all–every lion, every hummingbird, and every human being. Every human being except Cassius Moon. The Master is scared of being overpowered; Cassius Moon is out of his control, and he is sending someone for him. Two thousand years is a long time to be ruling over humanity–it is time for a new king.

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1587374-attitude-check

Summary: Jena Baton is just like any other sixteen year old girl. Except went to a school full of sex crazed teenagers. Thankfully she got out of there early and is off to college in New York. When she gets there she learns that it is not just a walk in the park. Being the the type of girl she is she ends up friends with the taxi driver, John Ransom, who by the way is twenty one. Jena has been a follow the rule kind of girl her whole life and has never done anything wreckless. With John's help Jena finally gets out there and begins to live her life. With every wreckless thing they do they become even closer. Is it possible that they could become more than friends? Read and find out!

Thank you so much for this. FYI the title is I'm question.

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Excuse My Charisma Action Romance. Watty Awards 2012 (so votes would be much appreciated). Aly Finnan is the quiet school girl, that is until she 'meets' mysterious Jasper Renn. Ever since saving him trouble has a way of finding her. Her actions to save this handsome stranger threw her into a steaming pot of gang related issues. Action, Romance, Love, Loss, Grief. Lovers vs Gang members. Who will win? http://www.wattpad.com/4032073-excuse-my-charisma-student-teacher-watty-awards

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http://www.wattpad.com/5661674-breathe

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1649704-red-on-the-floor :) hope u like it!

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@Elsceey4321 Are you still critiquing?? Cause here is mine :)

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Thanks in advance! <3

Sincerely me,

Rachel Desirée.

Victim of stunnin' stalker Sam,

secret-stalker of Samantha. (@BlackOpsII) ;)

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Have fun. http://www.wattpad.com/5438340-one-shots

Also, not to be petty or anything, but I'd prefer it if you wrote your criticism on the comments area so I can refer to it at any time, instead of on this thread. Thanks.

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@Elsceey4321 Book One of the Wolf Instincts Series - Lucas world changes when he meets werewolf Leon one night. Leaving behind an abusive father and a scattered family. Moving to Ohio in America were he begins his training with Leon. Can Luke make new friends and can he trust them? Is there other supernatural forces out there and who is trying to kill him and Leon. Can Lucas even survive one year as a werewolf? The key is to following his instincts and accepting change. (Needs to be edited)

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1574594-wolf-instincts-beginning-of-change-watty-awards

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{Romance}{Mystery}{Fantasy}

Love Surrounded by Darkness "Why won't you just admit it Miyla? You love me!" I look nervously between Bathlazar, Terrence, and Mikhail. It was time to stop hiding. I cannot run anymore. No matter who heard I had to say it. Out loud. And get this heavy burden off my chest. "It's true," I say confidently "I did love him, and...I still do"

http://www.wattpad.com/story/889780-love-surrounded-by-darkness

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1286510-grandmama%27s-mansion-massive-editing Hey , thanks for doing this! my story is a horror so you should enjoy:) Be as harsh as you want!XD

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@Elsceey4321 http://www.wattpad.com/story/1656366-by-the-passing-of-dawn

hey, please critique...thanks a lot:)

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Hope you give this story a shot:)

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1528052-project-popularity

Luke Archer and Summer Merrick have been the It-Couple at Roseville High. When Luke breaks up with Summer at the beginning of senior year, Summer reveals that she has been cheating on Luke with Paul Walden, Luke’s best friend. Angry and betrayed, Luke decides to get revenge, and he enlists the help of Jamie Vandeviere, a girl who has always been invisible to the popular crowd. Their goal is to transform Jamie into the most popular girl at school and take down Summer’s position as Queen Bee. However, being popular turns out to be a lot more difficult than what Jamie had in mind. What exactly has she gotten herself into?

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