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One year ago Delilah lost her virginity to her best friend's older brother, Alexander (Xander). When she woke up the next morning the bed was empty with no note and he wasn't anywhere in sight. Since that day Delilah and Xander have been at each other's throats twenty four seven. Delilah is now in a committed relationship, with a guy called Jesse. She is happy with him and they have lasted eight months. She thought everything would be perfect, but as she enters her junior year. Delilah finds that her relationship is breaking down with Jesse, and maybe the love she thought she felt is to take her mind of Alexander. When Delilah parents decided to take a six-month long cruise she moves in with her best friend. With, her and Alexander under the same roof are the secrets and lie revealed. Could this turn from hate to love only time can tell. http://www.wattpad.com/4690313-only-time-can-tell

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Hey there! I have a deal for you ! You have about 11 chapters and a prologue right? I have also above 10 chapters, So I'll start reading Your entire story so far, and in the process for every comment I give you, you give me a comment, like C4c, example I commented on prologue, I get on Chap1, I comment on chap 1 I get on chap 2?

So what do you think? If you agree I'll start with yours now :) @LittledropsofHeaven

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@WildRose393 yep that's fine.

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Alright, on it here's mine

http://www.wattpad.com/4048943-chronicles-of-a-speaker

Exposé 11

'Dr.Olivia Palm, I dont understand, please make me understand. How come I keep collapsing. This fall, this perishing, this succumb. I keep surrendering. But him? He's defying gravity doctor. He is defying gravity . Help me...'

Exposé 5

'I am the prisoner of his amity, I am the prisoner of my own delusion.'

@LittledropsofHeaven

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1572486-one-way-out sounds good

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Your book sounds really good, I'll definitely check it out. Would you mind reading my book!

Summary: I'll fan you as long as you'll read mine, please.

Summary: Jacey, a normal teenage girl keeps finding herself in undesirable situations with her blood related parents…or so she thinks. With a difficulty with trusting people, and a problem with making any physical contact, could anyone tell? During her 17 years of life she has experienced severe abuse by none other than her deluded father for some unknown reason, and a worthless Mother who never seems to care. With an escape route Jacey and her Mother Cassie are safe…for now. Problems arise when meeting the school’s troublesome Bad Boy-Aiden. Jacey seems to have an instant battle between herself with a certain brown eyed god in her mind. But what about Aiden? What is he hiding? Can he wound the binds, or will he pour salt to her cuts with his cruelness? Fate controls who walks into your life...

Genre: Romance/Paranormal/Vampire I promise you it isn't one of those cliché stories, it has a lot of twists. If you read and enjoy please vote/comment. Also would you mind suggesting it to other people. Thank you!

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@Rebellious_Script done

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@LittledropsofHeaven Sounds Interesting! Taking a Look now~ Pls read my story: Say A Prayer Teddy Bear http://www.wattpad.com/story/1499841-say-a-prayer-teddy-bear THE BED IS EMPTY Courage, compassion, and charity have changed the life of social worker Jade Erik. Now her life is thrown into chaos when terror is introduced. Someone is tormenting the abused children she works with, luring them into dark alleys and pushing them towards the edge. But Jade can't break her vow to protect the children's dark secrets and past. Even when Detective Nathaniel Coulter demands the information. Even when the approaching storm threatens Jade herself. THE CHILD IS GONE Nathaniel hates it when he has to deal with stubborn women who interfere with his job. Still, he can't help but admire Jade's undying loyalty towards her children, especially when the unnamed, faceless enemy makes it clear that the ultimate goal is to destroy her name, her family, and her life. As his heart softens, the killer's will harden, and one thing is very clear --- the snare is tightening around Jade's existence. SAY A PRAYER, TEDDY BEAR

Mystery, Suspense, Tiny bit of Horror, and a Dash of Romance~

THANKS!

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http://www.wattpad.com/5285108-2125-new-beginnings space , death, and missiles! im onto read yours now

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http://www.wattpad.com/5398093-our-love-is-a-lie There's only two chapters but I'd love a review! Thanks! :)

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@AnthonyOMahony done

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From the Start! <3 http://www.wattpad.com/1095030-from-the-start-published-epilogue

Trailer: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RSy6uPegHgU&feature=player_embedded

-Sixteen year old Rosalie Marshell lives a very difficult life. After her parents get divorced everything begins to fall apart, so she moves out of state, far away from her father. She is extremely angry with him, because of what happened to everyone in her family because of it, so Rosalie becomes very vulnerable.

-Once she begins her junior year in high school, she notices a mysterious boy, and slowly gets to know him. She swore she would never fall in love, but she couldn't keep that promise.

-And then unexpectedly Rose finds out he is hiding a life threatening secret from her. He has cancer, and is dying. Will Rosalie stay by his side, and go through everything with him, or will she tell him goodbye?

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@volleyballxcutie @Surreality1935 @WildRose393 done

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anymore?

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Sever Ties http://www.wattpad.com/story/1474639-sever-ties Jacey, a normal teenage girl keeps finding herself in undesirable situations with her blood related parents…or so she thinks. With a difficulty with trusting people, and a problem with making any physical contact, could anyone tell? During her 17 years of life she has experienced severe abuse by none other than her deluded father for some unknown reason, and a worthless Mother who never seems to care. With an escape route Jacey and her Mother Cassie are safe…for now. Problems arise when meeting the school’s troublesome Bad Boy-Aiden. Jacey seems to have an instant battle between herself with a certain brown eyed god in her mind. But what about Aiden? What is he hiding? Can he wound the binds, or will he pour salt to her cuts with his cruelness? Fate controls who walks into your life...

Genre: Romance/Paranormal/Vampire NOT A CLICHE STORY I PROMISE!

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