Reading and Critiquing Your Poems! - No Catch!:)

Ello!:)

So post your poems below and I'll put what I liked and what you could improve on!:)

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here are a few....read them all if you like or few if you want :P.... http://www.wattpad.com/2810025-my-poetry-book-poetry-book (i think i would prefer if you would suggest any flaws or point out any errors!)

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@Rebeccaa Heres some things I wrote If you wanna take a look :)

http://www.wattpad.com/4887746-from-the-heart-a-poem http://www.wattpad.com/story/1431573-i-wanna-hold-your-hand-a-poem

No pressure ^.^

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@Rebeccaa Hey, its QnG, check out my poem and follow me on Twitter @ShayQLegend http://www.wattpad.com/4337825-untitled-open-for-suggestions

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@Rebeccaa http://www.wattpad.com/story/1377995-hello-i-need-you-my-smiling-pessimistic-scars

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1223136-this-crystal-rain-poetry

http://www.wattpad.com/4109178-i%27m-a-fighter-not-a-lover

Tell me everything you can think to say :)

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@Rebeccaa http://www.wattpad.com/story/1427665-a-discordant-lullaby

Any improvements or typos? Thank you, purplechicken

:D

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Thanks :) http://www.wattpad.com/4907354-my-divine-death-stolen-piece-of-purity

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@Rebeccaa It would be really awesome if you checked out a few of mine :) This is one I have never gotten any feedback on, so anything you feel the need to critique would be much appreciated http://www.wattpad.com/4377519-roxanne-and-i

This poem I have received comments on about the actual content (it's titled "Sex and Ceiling Cracks", it's about love in relation to the concept) in a generally positive way, but no one's commented on the actual writing style of it http://www.wattpad.com/4073264-sex-and-ceiling-cracks

Thank you!

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Please give feed back. And pass on the word if you like what you read!

http://www.wattpad.com/4921186-dear-mike-stand-to-my-enemies http://www.wattpad.com/1695144-menace-2-poetry http://www.wattpad.com/431084-the-declaration-of-our-independence

Thank you...

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If you have the time I have a poetry book which has about four or five inside, please check it out! It's called 'Standing at the Crossroads'

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thanks for all the poems given, sorry i haven't been able to have a look recently! i'll get on them straight away:)

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@cherrybear finished yours:)

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@QnG24Oh finished yours:)

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/549756-sunflower-kisses

Here is a collection of poems. You can pick the ones you want to read. My favorite ones are Sunflower Kisses, Sandy dreams, Our Seasons, and Sunflower.

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http://www.wattpad.com/4938958-agateophobia-one-way

Thanks so much!

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Here's mine! Thankyou!:) http://www.wattpad.com/story/1227805-so-called-perfection http://www.wattpad.com/story/1322138-what-i-have-become

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http://www.wattpad.com/4777330-2012-poem

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This isn't mine but I think its a poem that deserves being read; she is new to Wattpad.

http://www.wattpad.com/5005156-my-angel

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