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Hey guys! I'm starting a sequel of My One Shot. The title is How to Woo a Girl So I was wondering if you have any advice you want to give Keith (The main character) in order to get the girl. I'll dedicate that chapter to you and tell people that it's your advice of course.. I want to make it realistic. For the girls... In what way do you want the guys to treat you while he courts you? For the Boys... How do you court a girl?

Just tell me your:

Name:

How do you want to be described:

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Thank you for helping an amateur writer such as myself, I hope you guys respond.. n___n

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Harmony House Description: Writer, painter, and lover of wattpad haha Advice: My boyfriend and I have been together for nearly three years (anniversary is in two weeks). Usually if something is wrong, I try to keep it to myself but he knows how to see through me and will offer a crying shoulder. We often wrestle and have fake fights - we rarely get truly angry, so we sort of role play. I'll call him a lying, cheating whore, then he'll say something about how all he wants is love. It's actually pretty fun even though it sounds weird.

Sometimes we'll come up with random scenarios. If we're walking around campus, I'll say "zombies are coming from the right, but you know Cincinnati gangs are taking shelter at the building at the front and this road is blocked off- what do you do?" Really, we just make sure to have fun with each other. We love to go out and explore and try new things. One time we were exploring the city and actually almost got robbed.

Now and then, we'll have some romantic moments. We'll be on his bed talking, then we'll fall into silence and turn to face each other. He begins to smile really broadly and I can tell he's happy to be with me -that always sends a horde of butterflies to my stomach haha. usually he comments on my eyes or my freckles and we'll start making out.

I hope this helped some, I hope it isn't too long >.< @Menmma

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@HarmonyHouse Hey! Thanks for taking the time to do this... YEY Don't worry, it isn't too long... I'll put everything you said here... So you, Harmony House, will appear as Keith's friend and he admires you because of your almost three years relationship and you'll tell him your advice.. n____n I'll dedicate the chapter as soon as I finished writing... Thanks again! n____n

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haha sounds like a plan, if you want better physical descriptions, just put in hazel eyes, wavy brown hair, round face, and a light complexion. If you look at my profile picture I'm the one on the right haha @Menmma

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@HarmonyHouse LOL... Yeah.. Thanks again.. n___n

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**left sorry I'm the one on the LEFT, with the bandana @Menmma

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@HarmonyHouse Oh I see.. LOL xD

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@Menmma

Julia Pearl Meg

Just a writer ((:

If they're childhood friends and are still close, then for Keith to get the girl... He should still do all the things they do together as friends, maybe walking together to school or something like that, but he should start showing the girl that he cares for her more than before.

Like maybe, it's been raining the whole weekend, Monday comes and they're walking to school. There are puddles everywhere. The girl didn't think there would be so many puddles so she wore her new shoes. Then Keith offers to carry the girl on his back so her shoes won't get wet.

So he does these sweet things. It's like, "actions speak louder than words" at first. Inevitably, the girl will start to notice that Keith is acting different. But in a good way. When this happens, then maybe Keith can gather the courage to actually tell her how he feels. Afterwards, he could continue to show her that what he feels is real.

I hope this was helpful. ((:

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@juliapearlmeg Thanks for the advice, I'll be sure that Keith hears it. Okay, so you're a friend of Keith and you're the school writer. You advised him to do the things you stated above. n___n I'll dedicate the chapter as soon as I finished writing.. n___n

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@OoAnimeLoveroO

Glad I could help. ((:

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im Jung SeungMin , a simple writer ^^ ..im not sure how to give my idea , but maybe if you read my story you'd catch some ideas ^^; lol sorry

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@JungSeungMinie Thanks but I already had the ideas.. All I want is to share one's romantic life/idea through my story.. n___n Thanks anyways..

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@juliapearlmeg @HarmonyHouse Hey guys, um, I might be deleting the story since I want to focus on my new story. So, instead I'll dedicate another story to you... n____n sorry forthe bother but I really appreciated them.. ! Ja~

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@OoAnimeLoveroO

That's okay. Good luck with your new story! ((:

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