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mangopuppy Joined: 2012-01-15 Posts: 143 |
11 months ago
Wow do I feel like critiquing today! I do 3 types of critiquing, so choose your type here: 1) Peppers (will point out spelling errors, repetitive mistakes, and all else erroneous in the story) 2) Spinach (will point out grammatical/spelling errors & any repetitive mistakes) 3) Ice Cream (will point out grammatical/spelling errors) Generally, I will do 2 chapters for each story; however I do require that you do one of the following: Fanning-Critiquing two chapters of my story OR one chapter of one story + poem-Dedication If I really like your story, I'll PM you for permission to use an excerpt in my book: http://www.wattpad.com/story/969668-madlibs-word-games-based-on-wattpad-stories Post away! Oh, by the way, the magic word is "fiver" and be sure to post that. :) I'll critique straight on the comment board unless you suggest otherwise. :) --mangopuppy |
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mangopuppy Joined: 2012-01-15 Posts: 143 |
11 months ago
FYI: I'm busy later this afternoon so I might not get to your story right away. First come first serve, indeed! :) |
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Wicketstar Joined: 2011-05-08 Posts: 34 |
11 months ago
Sure sounds like a good deal. I wont be able to look at yours until later though. Thanks. I will go with peppers ^^ http://www.wattpad.com/story/900531-my-taste-in-blood-prologue It's only the prologue (obviously) I might change some things in it already. But any help would be great. Thanks! Ninja! |
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mangopuppy Joined: 2012-01-15 Posts: 143 |
11 months ago
@Wicketstar I've sent over the critique, hope it's helpful. Don't forget to critique my story later, thank you! :) |
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mangopuppy Joined: 2012-01-15 Posts: 143 |
11 months ago
Anybody else? :) |
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mangopuppy Joined: 2012-01-15 Posts: 143 |
11 months ago
To be critiqued or to not be critiqued, that is the question... ;) Soliloquies! |
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mangopuppy Joined: 2012-01-15 Posts: 143 |
11 months ago
Oh, shall I compare thee to a summer's day....SHAKESPEARE!! :D "Spreading the Influence of Shakespeare, one Fanatic Post at a Time." XD |
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mangopuppy Joined: 2012-01-15 Posts: 143 |
11 months ago
B U M P |
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mangopuppy Joined: 2012-01-15 Posts: 143 |
11 months ago
Any takers? |
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mangopuppy Joined: 2012-01-15 Posts: 143 |
11 months ago
Have to leave now, will be back later. Don't be deterred if I don't respond!! |
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GageLeBlanc2 Joined: 2012-05-08 Posts: 765 |
11 months ago
http://www.wattpad.com/4754225-5-kids-and-a-monster http://www.wattpad.com/4494182-the-white-woman Can you critique every aspect please, Thank you !! :) Ninja :) |
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mangopuppy Joined: 2012-01-15 Posts: 143 |
11 months ago
@GageLeBlanc2 No problem, will do when I get back from some violin lessons. :) |
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GageLeBlanc2 Joined: 2012-05-08 Posts: 765 |
11 months ago
@mangopuppy Thank you :) |
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mangopuppy Joined: 2012-01-15 Posts: 143 |
11 months ago
@GageLeBlanc2 Yep, I'll do one chapter for each if that's OK with you--don't forget to critique/dedicate/fan back in the mean time! :) Thank you very much. |
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_ThisAccountIsGone Joined: 2011-07-29 Posts: 945 |
11 months ago
@mangopuppy http://www.wattpad.com/4201694-blood-stained-lies-on-hold-due-to-the-breaking-of http://www.wattpad.com/4411785-blood-stained-lies-on-hold-due-to-the-breaking-of Thanks, Peppers please, oh and I'mma ninja! =w= XD Weirdest post I've ever wrote I think... |
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mangopuppy Joined: 2012-01-15 Posts: 143 |
11 months ago
@DestinedTwins Hahahahaha! I'll head over to your story now; don't forget to critique/fan/dedicate; thank you!! :D |
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_ThisAccountIsGone Joined: 2011-07-29 Posts: 945 |
11 months ago
@mangopuppy Okay! ^^ |
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mangopuppy Joined: 2012-01-15 Posts: 143 |
11 months ago
@DestinedTwins Hey, thanks! :) It might take a few minutes to get your critique up since I still have a chapter of @GagedeBlanch2's stories to do. Thanks for your patience! |
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_ThisAccountIsGone Joined: 2011-07-29 Posts: 945 |
11 months ago
@mangopuppy It's okay! ^^ I need to sleep now anyways, it's getting late. :P |
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mangopuppy Joined: 2012-01-15 Posts: 143 |
11 months ago
@DestinedTwins Critiqued your first chapter (finally) sorry about the wait, again! |
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mangopuppy Joined: 2012-01-15 Posts: 143 |
11 months ago
@GageLeBlanc2 Gak! I'm so sorry, but the White Woman chilled me to the bones from the first paragraph....I'm particularly bad at reading Horror stories. D-: Do you have anything else you would like me to read? I'm extremely sorry, once again! It's really good though; I don't usually get scared that easily! |
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GageLeBlanc2 Joined: 2012-05-08 Posts: 765 |
11 months ago
Could you critique, friend zoned :) @mangopuppy |
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mangopuppy Joined: 2012-01-15 Posts: 143 |
11 months ago
Haha, no problem--I'm off to bed now but will critique when I have the time tomorrow. Thanks so much for your patience! I'm extremely sorry for the wait! |
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PinkyGurl Joined: 2012-05-03 Posts: 671 |
11 months ago
@mangopuppy Ninja... hi there :D:D can u critique my story? i'll go with peppers :D:D and don't worry i already fanned u and i'll dedicate my chapter 5 to u when u critique the story :D:D P.S just critique chapter 4 and 5, thank you :D the link: http://www.wattpad.com/4748289-forbidden-blood-chapter-4 |
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_Tiye13 Joined: 2011-04-22 Posts: 3213 |
11 months ago
Ninja!! Spinach
http://www.wattpad.com/story/962211-little-n-large-watty-awards-2012 Nicole Crystal Welsh is starting her sophomore year at her California performing Arts school with the best social status possible- a floater. Someone popular enough to hang with the popular crowd yet still have the ability to sit with newbies or freshmen. In a place where looks are everything Nicole is beyond satisfied with her position when the inevitable happens- girl meets boy. Floaters are usually loners but Nicole is popular enough to make it work, that's not the issue. The problem is Caleb is a whopping 5'6 and Nicole is 6'1. In a place where looks are everything Nicole must find the strength to break the cookie cutter mold or lose everything she's ever worked for with a few bumps along the way. |