Allright, I'm critiquing stories.

So you read that I am critiquing stories but there are a few conditions:- 1. I'll critique three chapters at a time, if there are more then bear with me but I assure you I will read it. 2. Post your link here, no need for posting the descriptions or the covers. 3. The stories must be un-discovered gems! I want to encourage authors with talent to rise. 4. If I like your story, I will support you and try to promote it. So those were the conditions. Now start posting! P.S. If you want to read my story and tell me how it is, I would love that! It's mystery/romance. It's not compulsory. Just check it out, if you want to Thanks :D

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http://www.wattpad.com/4009910-child-of-thorns-aegon-chapter-one

Thanks hope you like it reading your story now :D

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@Nerdechoz I'll read your story in a minute.

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@realmesneha

Title: Glittery Dust

Genre: Romance, Teen Fiction

Link: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1381098-glittery-dust-ongoing-series

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@LovingMyWriting Heading to your story

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my chapters are much longer than the average so it's perfectly ok if you can only manage one

http://www.wattpad.com/story/385264-jessica

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@realmesneha Thanks! :)

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@realmesneha Please critique a chapter! Thanks!

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1205946-midnight-disaster-~watty-awards-2012~

Sidenote: This is not an ET story people will die!! Cameron and Maya are great friends (sometimes borderline dating) looking for something to keep them entertained in their annual summer adventure. Little do they know it comes to them in the form of an abandoned alien. At first their main concern is keeping him hidden from the public and their friends until they realize that something is really wrong with the alien. On the night of the full moon they discover their true problem. Their hometown is in grave danger.

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/999117-the-girl-who-burned-fire-watty-awards-2012

Thanks

xxx

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@realmesneha

http://www.wattpad.com/story/962211-little-n-large-watty-awards-2012

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@realmesneha

I would considerit it undiscovered but if you don't think it is then you don't have to. It has fifteen chapters XD and if you want to continue on after that then there are more. You'll see what I mean.

http://www.wattpad.com/story/556139-countered-reputations-preparations-v-i

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1366611-i-bow-down-to-you And/Or http://www.wattpad.com/story/1382483-miss-posh these are both undescovered gems, i mean they both have under 100 reads! i dont know how to get more readers, so please help me!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thankyou! :)

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1419868-inhuman

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1419868-inhuman

@realmesneha Please critique my story, idk if it's that good. Positive or negative. THANKS! MORE POWER!

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Thank you! :)

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1333513-live-love-laugh-dream-and-everything-in-between

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I just started, but I want input! It's called "Shattered" http://www.wattpad.com/story/1415040-shattered

Thank you!

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I've just started with the story, will love to get your feedback! :) ww.wattpad.com/story/1425663-light-my-fire

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would love a critique on some of my new chapters, or even one . :)

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1281206-devoured-destiny

A story of stubborn love, reincarnation, and unseen majestical lands, OH and VAMPIRES. Ariel is a teenage girl, who is always over analyzing life. She has questions about everything. She is also told that she is a part of a different species of vampires. So she finds herself quickly questioning her insanity quite a lot after she is brought into an unknown land, meets a mysterious, handsome boy; and is told that she and him are the key to saving thousands of souls. She finds herself giving in, and she starts her journey. What she doesn't realize is that, this is not the first time she has begun this journey; Nor is it the second.

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http://www.wattpad.com/3064492-torment-prologue

I HAVE managed to get to #28 in Horror, but I've changed genres due to the Watties. Because of that, I'm not that well known. Not sure if I'm classed as an undiscovered gem, but...

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Hey! Could you please read my story so far? I’d really appreciate it a lot. :)

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1409842-don%27t-go-breaking-my-heart

Thanks a bunch <3

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:) Pretty please critique mine?

http://www.wattpad.com/4456785-safe-and-sound-chapter-one

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1409715-the-flaming-diary

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http://www.wattpad.com/4773123-mr-player-meets-ms-player-while-playing-games

@realmesneha

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@realmesneha http://www.wattpad.com/4807395-guarded-heart-rewritten

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http://www.wattpad.com/4190126-the-average-lives-of-above-average-teens

Thanks

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@realmesneha http://www.wattpad.com/4782133-making-circles thank you in advance

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