I am Willing to Critique your stories!

The Beauty: Rose Moreau has always been kind and gentle, but with years of physical and mental abuse from her father she has also learned how to become strong. Belle, her younger sister, is obsessed with the idea of a vampire whisking her away in the night and making her immortal. However, vampires and immorality come at a high price and Belle will do whatever it takes to become what she most desires. Though, Rose will risk everything she has to keep her little sister from this fate. The Beast: Antony Petrov has been haunted by the past memories of the woman he once loved. His heart hardened the moment she was taken from this world and has only coarsened through the years and leaving nothing but an empty shell filled with hatred towards the world and humans specifically. The Evanescence: When two different worlds collide, danger stirs for both them. Unexplainable events begin to occur both of them question everything including each other. Are they strong enough to withhold the danger? Or will they simply be like the evanescence of the morning mist and simply fade away?

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1358278-evanescence

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http://www.wattpad.com/4825829-the-seven-deadly-sins So, yesterday I started writing my first story and I really need to know what others think about it, should I continue or not.. What should I add or change.. ♥

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You would think finding the love of your life would be amazing right? Well, how about he was a vampire, and you were a werewolf? It wouldn’t make the situation any better that you never wanted a mate to begin with If you add in the fact that, that vampire mated on you and will try to make you fall for him you have the recipe for disaster. Not to mention your father wants revenge on your mate because his kind killed your father’s mate. Join Jessie Moon and Dante Sanguis on their not so love, love story.

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@RhythmIsWhoIAm MY BEST FRIEND JESSE

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1399697-my-best-friend-jesse

Justice Grendler is your average teenage girl leading a completely ordinary lifestyle. She’s a junior in high school with a few close friends to keep her social needs fulfilled, but just like most everyone else, she has that one friend that means more to her than anything or anyone else in the world. Her best friend, Jesse. Justice and Jesse, raised together through close family relations, have been inseparable since childhood. And nothing romantic or awkward has ever come into play between them in all the seventeen years of their lives spent together… That is only until Justice finds herself falling head-over-heels in love with Jesse. And that’s when everything changes…

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Could you pretty please critique my story? I'll leave the ad below. THANKS!

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I would really love it if you would critique either of my stories or my poem. One is a summer romance and one is a one direction fan fic. I'd be happy to do the same, just ask :)

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To those who are asking me to critique their stories, I'll do it maybe tomorrow or the day after? I just got a line of PM's from my fans to update my story so I hope you understand! :)))

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Jason is a fifteen year old boy who was recently transferred to a new school district by recommendation of his psychiatrist. Why? Just because he doesn't talk, barely eats, has little friends, and hates the world everyone thinks he wants to die. Now away from everything that made his depression there is a teacher, just this one, that will change his life when she gave him a little black book for him to write all his thoughts in, with the promise that only he will ever read a word he writes. It's self-discover and that's not what he wants at all. Will Jason get to fill out the last page or will his teacher stop him?

Read along with me as Jason fills out his entries! Currently he is up to Entry 12 and more coming almost everyday.

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1409715-the-flaming-diary

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Just critiqued your story! @ii4oo49

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@Snuffyy Just critiqued your story! Hope you'll fan me in return! :)))

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@LexiIsMyName Just critiqued your story! Hope you'll fan me in return! :)))

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@EllieTyler562 Just critiqued your story! :)))

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@ambiemills Finish! Hope you'll fan me in return! :)))

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@SkyCopeland Done! :))) Hope you'll fan me in return!

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Hey, I've been working on a photo-graphic novel, Of Myth and Men: The White Night

I'd really appreciate your input.

I have an online survey where you can check out my work, including videos of the concept work, draft costumes and draft layouts. Survey's ten minutes.

Here's the link:

https://www.surveymonkey.com/s/ofmythandmen_t

It's all rough work but I'm passionate about the book. I really want your honest feedback

Hope you share the link with your fans and friends.

Thanks for your time and consideration. Yours truly Francesco Coscarella

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Who Do I Love? : http://www.wattpad.com/story/1216164-who-do-i-love

Genre: Romance

He Forgot... : http://www.wattpad.com/story/1246994-he-forgot-one-direction-fan-fiction

Genre: Romance & Fan Fiction

Feedback would be awesome!

Gonna fan you now !

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1421905-hunger-it%27s-my-whole-life-now

Jayne was a 14 year old girl living in the heart of Massachusetts, the big city of Boston, obviously not as big as New York but it was all she knew, Jayne had many friends and family that loved her, she was close to every single one of them, except they don’t know the awful secret she is hiding, Jayne is a anorexic/bulimic, she hate’s food, never liked it once, she shy’s away from people while their eating in fear of being sucked in, on the rare time that she does eat she can’t keep it down, like her body is made to throw up after meals, once her family finds out about what she has been up to can they save her, or is Jayne way beyond repair?

Hey if you don't mind checking this out and letting me know what you think that would be amazing, when you get the time, i am sure your busy.

thanks for the time

And one ast thing, if you could comment on the story that would be more helpful, because i am most likely to forget about this and not check, it, if that is not too much to ask, thanks again <3

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Uhh... So, I have my new story that I posted 2 months ago and I'm too lazy to advertise it to the public until now cause I'm bored and got nothing better to do, so, yea, here it is ≧ω≦ Also, I currently only have one chapter (and 4 pages) so it's not much of a chore to read this. The link below will lead you to the summary of my story.

Royal Aunty Danielle

Σ(°Д° ) I'm 13 as well and I love the phrase YOLO!! Are you also Filipino?

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