Ill give detailed critiquing for free!!

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1352624-in-the-end-laura

Plot:

The coldest climates are getting hotter by the second and the warmest places are going through blizzards and snow storms. The poles are switching. The world has been set into chaos. Major earthquakes and tsunamis have hit the earth wiping it clean of people. Well, most people. The few that remain have been forced together. A man takes charge but still chaos erupts upon the people. It's a fight for their lives. Kaerla runs away from the group knowing she can't survive with them but as she is going she finds a curious boy. He looks like he is on his death bed. With her knowledge on first aid she slowly helps heel him back to health. But they aren't safe yet. Something is after them and the earth is still constantly moving. Through the night voices are heard and shadows are seen but the don't come close enough to Kaerla and the mysterious boy. Not at least until he's good enough help. They know there are more people alive and they are plotting something but what? On top of that the girl has the group of people searching for her. She knows she can never go back but what if going back is her only choice to save her from what else lies in the ruined world that used to be called earth.

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Love it if you could check this out, specifically my most recent chapter. http://www.wattpad.com/4807470-journey-grand-tour-please

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@smilemedead

http://www.wattpad.com/story/917408-the-revenge-of-the-fallen-watty-award-2012

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@smilemedead http://www.wattpad.com/story/917408-the-revenge-of-the-fallen-watty-award-2012 http://www.wattpad.com/story/1166614-the-war-of-the-mortals-watty-award-2012

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1005857-treason Preface: In a place known to those who live there as Threchan: three societies reside. These societies are permanent, once born into one; there is no escaping its deadly claws. You must abide by the rules or be executed. There is no sympathy for those who disobey the law. Any breach of the law is considered heinous and will not be taken lightly. Those who obey will be reworded at the age of 82. You are expected to obey.

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Just posted today :) Check it out if you'd like.

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1349758-kissing-for-dummies

Carson Tyler has had the biggest crush on track star, Declan Matthews, since she first saw him in elementary school. Now in the 11th grade, inexperienced Carson is presented with a chance to date this superstar, except there's one problem -- she has absolutely no clue how to kiss a boy. Desperate to have every moment with her what-could-be first boyfriend perfect, she seeks help from kissing guru, Blake Bradshaw, who just happens to be her brother's best friend. When Blake accepts her plea, he is quick to initiate Carson's kissing lessons and is surprised by her innocence and purity - not that it lasts for long. With sparks, conflicting emotions, and two attractive guys, Carson's not sure what she's doing, or who she wants to be anymore...

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http://www.wattpad.com/4810159-too-different-to-be-friends#!p=1

It's just one chapter so far!! I would love some feedback and comments :P Vote and Fan if you like :)

Thanks so much!!!!

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http://www.wattpad.com/4968127-loving-caitie-james

Caitie and her mother never really got along, so when her mother finally pushes Caitie over the edge, she leaves. Living on the streets of downtown Chicago, alone and cold, Caitie get's hit by a car. When she wakes up, she's in the house of one of the most spectacular (and unknown) performing groups of their time. Then, when their manager quits, Lauren, convince Caitie to be their new manager. But,how can she pay attention to managing the group, when there are so many boys fighting for her hand?

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@smilemedead hello. i hope to not be late, cause i really need someone that gives me some serious critique. if you still can give a read to them and leave me some feedback, well thank you so much! i leave you here the links of my stories.

Fallon (Fan fiction) - http://www.wattpad.com/story/1446428-fallon After the rain (Teen fiction) - http://www.wattpad.com/story/1452072-after-the-rain Cancer (Short story) - http://www.wattpad.com/story/1448143-cancer

thank you so much, even if you'll read just one, it means a lot!

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1004738-the-princess-switch Hope you like it! Thanks in advance.

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1461160-unexpected

Would love your thoughts on this inspirational teen fiction. Thanks!

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If you could find the time to read this and tell me what you thought, that would be great.

http://www.wattpad.com/5032097-the-old-ones

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@smilemedead http://www.wattpad.com/1862746-the-worst-part-chapter-1-callie

Callie Tyler and Kalen Woods are two complete strangers, leading totally different lives. What happens when, in a dangerous twist of fate, their lives are suddenly thrown together, and their battle to survive begins? Who will live and who will die?

:)

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1471941-our-little-ecapade

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I'd love if you gave me detailed feedback on my story! :)

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1342933-killing-me-softly

Here it is! :) If you decide to read my story, thank you in advance!

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1475150-guilty-conscience

thx babes!

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@smilemedead

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1339911-everlasting

Please read the first chapter and if u want the second Thanks in advance :)

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PLEASE critique my story! I need some constructive criticism!!! I'm posting the chapters as I write. So far I have the first one. Thanks :) http://www.wattpad.com/story/1477111-tears-of-blood

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Hey, I've been working on a photo-graphic novel, Of Myth and Men: The White Night

I'd really appreciate your input.

I have an online survey where you can check out my work, including videos of the concept work, draft costumes and draft layouts. Survey's ten minutes.

Here's the link:

https://www.surveymonkey.com/s/ofmythandmen_t

It's all rough work but I'm passionate about the book. I really want your honest feedback

Hope you share the link with your fans and friends.

Thanks for your time and consideration. Yours truly Francesco Coscarella

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@smilemedead

Title: My Dream to Keep

Genre: Romance/Fantasy/Teen Fiction

Summary: Life isn’t as it seems for Hazel Jordan. She thought that she had the world’s most loyal boyfriend, she thought that she only had one enemy to worry about, she thought that she normal- besides her being adopted and the strange dreams she’s had all her life. But then Parker Reyonlds comes to her small town of Dream Haven and everything she thought to be true turns out to be way more than a little white lie.

Link: http://www.wattpad.com/5196345-my-dream-to-keep

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Title: With Open Wings

Summary: Rezeriel Realms will soon be the head of the Dole Clan once his mother steps down, but upon finding his mate, Bari, mysteriously inside the border of the Clan's territory, things seem to get crazier. Bari seems to be the focus of a diabolical plan that could destroy the three Realms. Can Rezeriel control the clan and keep his mate safe, or will he have to chose? For which does he love more: his Goddess or his soulmate?

Link: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1510218-with-open-wings-boyxboy

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@smilemedead Just pick based on the cover. I want to see what appeals to people, and I'd like you to post what you think of the cover in the comment, thanks :)

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Hey!! :) I am kind of new here!!

Author : Alreadyblessed! :)

Title : Crystal clear?

Summary : Elizabella Pounds's life is a complete mess at this time. Her mother is getting re-married, her biological father is bringing stars into his record label storyand her step-brother is hot. A new town, new friends and let's just throw in her old friends and some new ones to the equation and this becomes a disaster. Crystal Clear? Not so much!

Link : http://www.wattpad.com/story/1503186-crystal-clear

Umm... if you could tell me what you liked and which parts you didn't? Because I gotta understand the reader's perspective! :)

You can read only one chapter. Your wish, though! :)

Comment on the chapter itself. No PM, please! :)

Thanks a lot! :)

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1393746-saviour

Watch where you step. You may just end up in another world entirely.

And Laine didn't watch where she stepped.

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Please and thank you :)

http://www.wattpad.com/story/455409-tears-of

Tears Of

Fantasy/Romance

This is a retelling of Beauty and the Beast. The King's niece, Caeollina, has been sent off to be married to some prince far off. However on the voyage there her fleet is attacked by pirates. Through some unlikely events she finds herself afloat on a life boat in the middle of the sea with her trusted friend. Days later they find themselves at a strange castle on strange new land with strange people, and of course the strange, beastly prince.

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