I can critic your work!! Click here! Click now!! :)

I would truly appreciate it if you took the time to read my story, out of the thousands on this site, and give me an honest critique. I'm barely on the first chapter and I'm wondering if it's any good. Thank you in advance.

Here's the link: http://www.wattpad.com/819281-drawing-with-light

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http://www.wattpad.com/715966-a-swapper%27s-tale

Thanks! :)

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http://www.wattpad.com/1484437-the-love-padlock

Please read from the very start to the latest chap please?? :)

And another one : http://www.wattpad.com/1628363-gotcha

Thanks!!

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http://www.wattpad.com/1565793-a-saucy-noodlicious-love-letter-%C2%A9 Genre: Short story, Humor. It's super short... just a page long.

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http://www.wattpad.com/4572529-furry-situations http://www.wattpad.com/4536906-siren-song Hey I posted these recently and I can't get an honest review. Please review this I might be too late :/

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1159890-the-vigilante

thanks just don't be a grammar nazi only two pages!

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@Saraheve Hey there. :) If you still have time, I'd like you to read my work. :) Hopefully you read at least past the first chapter, then if you think that the story is interesting enough, it's up to you if you want to read more. :) Here's the link. :) http://www.wattpad.com/story/443005-soul-of-the-phoenix Thanks in advance. :D

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@Saraheve http://www.wattpad.com/story/1251791-the-lost-dreamer

When fifteen-year-old Eden Paris discovers that not only is she not human but rather, a descendant of gods and angels, a demiangel, she is plunged into the world of the Ethereal Society, a society of the higher half-bloods. Eden is determined to sever herself from the world she thought only existed in books and fairytales but it seems that the only way to get out of the mess her Scent caused her was to tie herself to the handsome yet intolerable and haughty young William Sage as his Consor, a warrior sworn by blood and soul to protect his other to death.

Something stirs outside of the protective barrier of the Sanctuary. More and more demiangels have been reported kidnapped and hadn't been discovered nor heard from anyone. When Eden learns that her best friend is in grave danger, she is drawn deeper into the secrets of the Hidden World.

In this adventure packed novel, Eden learns that some things are rather much better off hidden under the covers of her books.

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1257157-battlefield-foe please i would love to have some major feedback on my story....dont worry i have tough skin...so dont be afraid to let me know anything on my story

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@Saraheve Hi could you critique a chapter of Midnight Disaster? Thanks!

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1205946-midnight-disaster-~watty-awards-2012~

Sidenote: This is not an ET story people will die!! Cameron and Maya are great friends (sometimes borderline dating) looking for something to keep them entertained in their annual summer adventure. Little do they know it comes to them in the form of an abandoned alien. At first their main concern is keeping him hidden from the public and their friends until they realize that something is really wrong with the alien. On the night of the full moon they discover their true problem. Their hometown is in grave danger.

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1321967-high-school-of-the-dead http://www.wattpad.com/4494182-the-white-woman Hope you enjoy ! :D

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@Saraheve I would appreciate it if you read mine. http://www.wattpad.com/story/1073940-raven%27s-rebirth

It's fairly short right now, and it's only the beginning. Thanks! :)

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(Click on the photo for the direct link to my story.)

'Me and you... That's how it was supposed to be."' Miz & Danny are two perfect people... With the most imperfect life. They lived their lives peacefully and they were both happy until they met each other. Now that they have fallen in love a series of consequences has formed from this forbidden love. No-one wants them to be together and it seems as if the whole world is only going to be at peace when they decide to split up, but Miz already knows that losing him would mean losing her means of survival. They can't live without each other, but when Danny gets seriously injured, Miz starts to prepare for the worst.

'And that's when I realise that I would rather have died than loved a boy named Danny Cole.'

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@Saraheve hi, pls critic my story

any chapter from chapter 3 and up.

thank you!

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1378084-tea-for-two

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This is definitely an original, non-cliche story. I hope you will enjoy this sweet tale of two broken lovers. Thanks in advance.

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@Saraheve

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1166614-the-war-of-the-mortals-watty-award-2012

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1166614-the-war-of-the-mortals-watty-award-2012

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Click on picture

"I know everyone’s dirty little secrets. Everyone in this town is scared of me and even though it may not be normal, I like it."

Read it, and Vomment please :D

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