Science Fiction and Fantasy Critiquing Thread *CLOSED*

I critique Science Fiction and Fantasy stories.

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1092234-fantasy-%26-science-fiction-reviews-volume-ii

That is a link with an example of said critiques.

While I am not asking for anything in exchange for these critiques, which are done in my free time, I hope you would like to read some of my stories.

Now post away!

*The user reserves the right to choose not to critique any works posted.

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@theolddarkness I read some of your critiques, they're scary. Well here's mine http://www.wattpad.com/story/1240113-freeze-fantasy-short-story-smackdown

Thanks!

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@Lost_In_A_Dream You want me to critique a smackdown story? *peers over glasses* are you sure?

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@theolddarkness Its probably the best I have. The rest is crap.

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@theolddarkness Actually, I'm rethinking this, so nevermind. I'll be back.

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@Lost_In_A_Dream too late. *laughs ominously*

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@theolddarkness You're kind of evil, but I still have Sauron.

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@Lost_In_A_Dream Don't spam my thread, or I'll report you.

That said, you'll have to pay me now I've wasted my time and you don't want the critique.

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@theolddarkness I'll take the critique. I'll comment on your story too. Do you want me to get rid of Sauron?

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@Lost_In_A_Dream Please. This is a service industry, after all. No scaring the customers.

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@theolddarkness Sorry.

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@Lost_In_A_Dream Apologies accepted.

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@theolddarkness Here: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1309298-eye-of-the-storm

You know she would post this eventually.

@-1812-

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@Ferretlp Later. Writing TLM.

@Lost_In_A_Dream Done yours - dedicated and linked your story in it.

http://www.wattpad.com/4637212-fantasy-%26-science-fiction-reviews-volume-iii

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@theolddarkness kay ^^

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@theolddarkness

OH OH! I want on the critiquing band wagon! I read yours of @Lost_In_A_Dream... and since you seem to have some kind of issue with short stories... can I give you one? XD

http://www.wattpad.com/story/985293-the-girl-in-the-forest

It's categorized as 'horror' but its a dark fairy tale sort of story. Will that work for you?

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@dreamingthought

Ya. Will do later/tomorrow. Writing now.

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@theolddarkness - No problem. Figured you were a bit pre-occupied. Have fun with your story. It's the one you're writing about this guy, right?

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@Ferretlp @-1812-

Well, it is done, for good or ill.

http://www.wattpad.com/4639584-fantasy-%26-science-fiction-reviews-volume-iii-eye

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Hey, I hope you can check my story out :) Thank you very much!

http://www.wattpad.com/3912043-escape-solaris-cane-book-one-escape-prologue

We exist. That's what was written in the letter. And after that, her life changed.

Four years after an accident leaves her without memories, Solaris Cane is doing pretty well. She lives with her family, has a great life. But something bothers her, a constant emptiness she feels. A man appears, claiming she has the power to help a planet that she knows she's never been to. A woman named Alaine claims that she's meant to help, meant to do something great. Solaris doesn't know what to do, but as she pieces the puzzles together, can she find out more about herself? What about her memories, the one which she thought long gone? Can she rise up to the expectations?

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Yes! finally someone to critique Sci-Fi,,,, please check out my story :)

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1301379-x-periment-v

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@theolddarkness I was wondering if you could read my work? :) It's a blend of fantasy and romance. In case you're interested, here's the link and a teaser. :)

http://www.wattpad.com/story/443005-soul-of-the-phoenix

WARNING: This story contains secrets and scenes not recommended for the faint of heart. But if you are strong and brave enough to believe that there are greater powers at work, forces of which we hardly know, and gifted creatures and humans who walk among us everyday, then you've come to the right place. If you believe in the power that exists deep within all of us, and if you believe in the importance of friendship, trust and love, then read on. And spread the word. We all have powers that are unique to us. Are you ready to find out about yours?

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@dreamingthought

Here you go: http://www.wattpad.com/4648557-fantasy-%26-science-fiction-reviews-volume-iii-the?d=ud

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my turn is really close *heart beat* *heart beat* , could you please read all 4 chapters before giving your opinion? because the 1st two are really small and don't pack a lot :X

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I would love for you to critique, thanks.

HERE IS THE LINK: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1374670-fountaineers

SYNOPSIS: There is an island where only the young can go. It is said that the secret to immortality resides there. Two multi-billionaires, nearing the end of their lives are determined not to die. They deeply hate each other, and since they can not go to the island, they each hire a team of young people to go in their places. The goal: find the secret before the other team gets all the glory. The two young teams battle it out while trying to decipher the riddles written on the ancient ruins, built by an unknown people. Some fall in love, and others seek to fulfill personal vendettas. But all in all, most find that coming to the island was a terrible, haunting mistake. This is an epic, lawless tale of the controversial meanings of life and death. It will blow you away and keep you dying for more.

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