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I will read your story and comment on it, so long as it's PG-13 or lower and doesn't have awful language. It's not required, but I'd appreciate it if you'd do the same for me :) I leave awesome comments, by the way :)

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1263377-the-six-swans-retelling-of-the-grimm%27s-fairy-tale

After the tragic death of her mother, Princess Sydnee Adeliene began her study to become the future Queen of Adalaide, going practically unnoticed by her father the King and older brothers. But when her father marries a witch and sends his seven children away to the confines of the unforgiving Cypress forest, her brothers are placed under a curse – one that turns them into swans. To save them, Sydnee must take a vow of silence for one year. Falling in love seemed out of the question. Love, however, cannot be confined by the inability to speak.

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@strengthen_me: I'll check out yours. :) Thanks!

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1322761-blossoms-for-bees

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1313258-coffee-shop-blues

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@strengthen_me I'll check out yours! (:

The Ultimate Motivation:

http://www.wattpad.com/1929482-the-ultimate-motivation

Meet Alexis - your typical teenager. Well, besides the fact that she hates make up, doesn't want popularity, doesn't want to diet--oh wait never mind. Let's back up here. Meet Alexis. Your not so typical teenager. Her interests? Chocolate, candy, junk food...the food list could go on forever. But, let's forget that for now. Her parents are sick of her eating habits. To solve this "issue", they decide to send her to Camp Sandy Hills (CSH), a fat camp, where they teach you all about eating right. Meet Emma, an impecunious, poor girl, who wants nothing more than to be skinny and popular. To achieve this, she believes that she must attend CSH for the summer. Alexis and Emma are somewhat like the colors, black and white. Put the two together in a cabin for a whole summer and what do you get? Total chaos. The only thing they have in common is Zach, the cute counselor, that all the girls seem to be crushing on. Their ultimate motivation, to become skinnier? Zach. This is going to be one crazy summer.

Thank you so much for reading, I really appreciate it! :)

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Hardest Heart to Shatter

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1240666-hardest-heart-to-shatter

Kara lives in Utopia, an alternate universe where her sole purpose is to do the dirty work of others. Grown up in an orphanage, Kara is now a Royal Assassin. She lives in luxury despite the risks she takes every day. But Kara knows nothing of her past before age 12, when she was taken from the orphanage and began training to be an assassin. Kara soon realizes that not all is perfect, even in Utopia, and begins to search for her lost memories. But wherever she goes, there seems to be a nagging presence following her. And what happens when an assassin of the highest ranks can't kill her next victim? Kara is about to find out.

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Enshroud: An Avery Carter Novel

By: Ryan Walker (rwalker)

Genre: Thriller/Action

Similar stories by these authors: Tom Clancy, Brad Thor, James Rollins, Vince Flynn, Robert Ludlum, Steve Berry, and of course the author of the Da Vinci Code Dan Brown

Deep in the Congo rain forest in Africa, a warlord and a planned overnight attack upon a small Mission are stopped, and a shady trail of crumbs leads CIA operative: Avery Carter, and his partner John Huxley, into a covert as well as overt struggle against a Christian radical group headed by a trinity of cunning deadly assassins. They have already assassinated the Orthodox Patriarch, and they have more plans on their agenda, which aims at shooting global cynicism sky high, high enough to turn religion on religion, and nation on nation. They plan to rise from the ashes and assert their rule and testament on the world. While Avery Carter and John Huxley, backed by other operatives, rush to defend the world from their torrent of terrorism and assassination in which they masquerade as other parties, and bring down each of the trinity to avoid the looming World War III. http://www.wattpad.com/story/1109804-enshroud-an-avery-carter-novel

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@SassyKoalaBear Done :) loved them both!

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1152264-fatum

FATUM

There's a reason high school senior Athena Thorpe spends every available moment reading books: fiction is always so much better than the real world. Even the unexpected scandal she suffered thanks to Jackson Montgomery was just a blip in her typically mundane existence in Sparrow, North Carolina. But no story could ever compare to the life-altering events that occur when Gabriel Valente moves into town. Being the son of a notorious crime lord and having grown up on the streets of Manhattan, Gabriel defies all the expectations the students of Sparrow High have for him, including Athena's. She never expected he would match her interest in the written word, or his unlikely grand gestures and definitely not the immediate but intense feelings which cause them to spiral into a secret relationship. A relationship that hinders on Gabriel's uncertain future, which could find him being the heir to the mob throne. Whether or not she wants to admit it, Athena knows the world Gabriel comes from is a dark and violent one. It's just really easy to pretend it doesn't exist within the bubble that is Sparrow. Yet, no matter how much we pretend, reality is never far away, with Gabriel and Athena learning a tragic lesson about choice and consequence a little too late. When you finally decide what you want most in life, the next question becomes: will fate agree?

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@strengthen_me http://www.wattpad.com/story/1312860-a-pirate%27s-penalty Young adults out in the new world would understand. Freedom. The one word that my tongue has not tasted. Even one voyage out into the sea for one year would be enough. But the dreams that you have achieved are just that in my world. Dreams. thanks! :)

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@strengthen_me I've read your book before :)

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@blueicystar @darkartist9756 done :)

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http://www.wattpad.com/4566234-poor-little-rich-girl-chapter-11-if-everyone-cared

Richie G she had everything a person could want. She was rich, with rich parents, famous, and gorgeous. She could have any boy/thing she wanted, and had thousands of friends...but her only fault was that she was an ungrateful, rude brat. An unfortunate, but not accidental event happens and Richie ends up stuck in her home town for awhile...Join us on an interesting adventure and see what happens when a series of advents come and change her life forever, and who she is forever.

http://www.wattpad.com/4547962-rolling-in-the-deep-chapter-five-confessions

Join me as Danielle's live unravels infront of her eyes...secrets will be exposed that lead to the truth about everyone she knows and loves. Her life has always been on the edge and scary, but this next year of her life will teach her that No one is who they say they are anymore...everyone is a liar, she only has one friend and that is the mystery man.

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I have two but if you want you only have to read one http://www.wattpad.com/story/1267912-is-this-real-love I am still working on this one and it is a romance book. A girl name Kallie got a love letter and she just figure out who wrote the letter. When she goes on a date her date puts a sleeping pill in her drink and when she wakes up she is back in the midevil times

this book I had to write in school it is a mystery http://www.wattpad.com/story/1259346-mysterios-chair

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@rwalker done :)

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1339507-the-chase

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@strengthen_me Here is mine :D I'll check yours out!

Auctioned Hearts

Genre- Romance/ Drama/ comedy

Link - http://www.wattpad.com/story/1131779-autioned-hearts

Summary- The year is 2015 and Chenoa's family is poor, so they are doing what any regular family would, Auction dates with her off to rich men. When she is won by the dark haired, green eyed celebrity Demyan Levontav things start to heat up. How will Chenoa deal with his snotty attitude? And how will Demyan feel when his enemy Peyton starts to get to know Chenoa?

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@NMBooks Done! :) If I don't get to everyone's tonight, I promise I'll get to them tomorrow!

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http://www.wattpad.com/4236147-tea-time-prolouge

Ethel and Eli are twins on the brink of separation. While nearing the age seventeen Eli knows he is to be drafted into the Union Army and fight against his younger sibling, who ran away to join the Confederates. The only way the twins can hope to be together is if they take an invitation to work for the eccentric and strange Dr. Abner Edwards. Seems simple enough, right?

But Dr. Edwards has a secret, one that involves a world that might just live right beneath the ground, a negro who claims to have powers to see the unseen, and an exotic boy who claims to be from the future.

How will the twins survive with an angry mob running after Eli, odd creatures attacking the patients, a civil war of another world effecting their own, or troubles with the time-space continuum? Never mind that, it's time for tea.

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@Scriptor done!

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if you could read mine that would be great :)

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1277623-even-though-the-sun-sets

Blair and Delia Peters have been through it all. They have survived everything together; from their alcoholic druggie mother to the rise of Blair's successful singing career. As Blair's 18th birthday approaches she has big plans for her sister and herself, but when Delia is suddenly diagnosed with a life threatening disease will all those plans fall to pieces? With her sister's life on the line everything is put into perspective for Blair. She doesn't have time for anything, especially not a love life, but can Liam teach her otherwise? Can he help her understand that even though the sun sets it can always come up again?

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@TrilliumAngel done! And so glad that you've read mine before! Hope you liked it! :)

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I just started and it's only one chapter, but can you tell me what you think? :) I'm just new to wattpad. :D here's the summary:

Saffron Cox is your normal teenager. She's pretty with her long wavy hair and tall figure, but in her eyes, she's just average. So what happens when she develops a crush for her bad boy neighbor Axel? What happens when her insanely hot best friend Keaton lives right across her? Saffron is torn between the two boys as she experiences the thrills of being in love and the heartbreaks that come with it.

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1336109-neighbors

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1171492-the-secrecy-of-the-underestimated :]

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@blackswanx3 done on both of them! :)

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@Gumdrop09 done :)

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If you wouldn't mind reading mine

The Black Knight

http://www.wattpad.com/story/952408-the-black-knight-watty-awards-2012

She found him on the beach. His clothes spoke of wealth, his hands told of work, but it was the scars on his face that told Nan who the man before her was, Sir William Horton, the resident Hero of Ashford. He was the richest man in five counties and a well known bastard. Rumors of very kind were whispered about Ashford’s infamous Black Knight, his all encompassing cruelty, his frozen heart, the twisted means by which he found pleasure. Every creature in Ashford knew to give him a wide berth, to keeping a wagging tongue still, and eyes trained anywhere but on him when he came into view. So when Nan found him and was neither distant, silent nor looking anywhere but directly at him, Ashford’s Black Knight began to stumble over the oddity of this girl. Her fearlessness, her honesty, her intelligence, even her unassuming beauty held him captivated. But how could a simple beggar girl be so many things? Who was this woman that held his attention, or more importantly who had she been before coming to Ashford?

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