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ZADArocksmyworld Joined: 2012-01-06 Posts: 98 |
1 year ago
Hello? |
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UnusDeo Joined: 2011-11-19 Posts: 283 |
1 year ago
@sgeunqk I've got your back tomorrow. |
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happylittleava Joined: 2011-08-07 Posts: 1683 |
1 year ago
@AutisticAlice Right, so we can look up Janpanese words (like river or forest) and put them together |
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ZADArocksmyworld Joined: 2012-01-06 Posts: 98 |
1 year ago
♣ (Required) What are you here for (title, names, or feedbacks): I'm here for feedback for my story Zorg http://www.wattpad.com/3400819-zorg-rising-above-the-odds-prologue ♣ (Required) Summary: Ann, a mind reader, and Drew, her genius twin brother, are living a normal life when everything begins to spiral out of control. After being accepted into a spy training Ann and Drew begin training to become Zorg Agents. When they overhear a mysterious visitor talking about their missing father they have to investigate. This leads them halfway across the country in an attempt to find their missing father. The only thing is that they weren't informed of just how many obstacles they'd need to overcome to rise above the odds. ♣ (Required) Who you request for I don't care Not all of it is online. It's book 1 of 5 |
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AutisticAlice Joined: 2011-11-09 Posts: 172 |
1 year ago
@happylittleava Yeah, I guess that could work. I've never been good at come up with those kind of things. D: |
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_JustThatRedHead Joined: 2011-09-27 Posts: 14 |
1 year ago
@hellscream2797 heyy, I don't know if this is a grammar question or not. But your opinion would be great! Do you think writing in the present tense or the past tense is better? Like, which flows/sounds better? |
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sgeunqk Joined: 2011-04-14 Posts: 214 |
1 year ago
thanks! @UnusDeo |
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UnusDeo Joined: 2011-11-19 Posts: 283 |
1 year ago
I haven't forgotten about you guys. I'm switching internet providers and I'll be sure to read your stories once the switch is complete. |
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_optimisticalme Joined: 2012-03-19 Posts: 1118 |
1 year ago
ummm...I just wanted to know if my request was accepted? |
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happylittleava Joined: 2011-08-07 Posts: 1683 |
1 year ago
@AutisticAlice Right, what will the city be like? Maybe there used to be a forest or a river flowing through the heart. What do you want it to be like? :) |
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happylittleava Joined: 2011-08-07 Posts: 1683 |
1 year ago
I've came up with a few... 1 River Town 2 New City 3 Blue Forest 4 Land of the cherry blossom 5 Silent Plains I was being creative.. Lol xD (Japanese words:) 1 Kawa taun - 2 Atarashī shiti - 3 Aonomori - 4 Sakura no tochi - 5 Sairento heigen - |
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SEscuadro Joined: 2012-04-24 Posts: 1386 |
1 year ago
I'm here for feedbacks. Summary: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1251791-the-lost-dreamer When fifteen-year-old Eden Paris discovers that not only is she not human but rather, a descendant of gods and angels, a demiangel, she is plunged into the world of the Ethereal Society, a society of the higher half-bloods. Eden is determined to sever herself from the world she thought only existed in books and fairytales but it seems that the only way to get out of the mess her Scent caused her was to tie herself to the handsome yet intolerable and haughty young William Sage as his Consor, a warrior sworn by blood and soul to protect his other to death. Something stirs outside of the protective barrier of the Sanctuary. More and more demiangels have been reported kidnapped and hadn't been discovered nor heard from anyone. When Eden learns that her best friend is in grave danger, she is drawn deeper into the secrets of the Hidden World. In this adventure packed novel, Eden learns that some things are rather much better off hidden under the covers of her books. I request for UnosDeo please. :) |
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UnusDeo Joined: 2011-11-19 Posts: 283 |
1 year ago
I'm back and ready to read. @SEscuadro I got your back! |
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KeptInShadows Joined: 2012-03-28 Posts: 975 |
1 year ago
Nvm :) |
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RiordanGeek Joined: 2012-06-11 Posts: 210 |
1 year ago
@UnusDeo Hey, I was wondering if you could help me on a title. (I'm not sure if you do this or not...) But it's called Chasing Fire right now, and I feel like it should be something better. Just read the description. That's all you need. |
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UnusDeo Joined: 2011-11-19 Posts: 283 |
1 year ago
@RiordanGeek Chronicles of Fire? |
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RiordanGeek Joined: 2012-06-11 Posts: 210 |
1 year ago
Okay! I'll think about it. It does sound interesting though. @UnusDeo |
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UnusDeo Joined: 2011-11-19 Posts: 283 |
1 year ago
@RiordanGeek I can come up with more, but that one just rolled off the tongue immediately. And Chasing Fire is extremely close to Catching Fire, lol. |
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IrisLock Joined: 2012-05-09 Posts: 61 |
1 year ago
♣ (Required) What are you here for (title, names, or feedbacks): Names ♣ (Required) Summary: After four years of her brother statues being missing, Charlotte has long given up on assuming he is alive. But when the Authorities take her in to question his whereabouts, she decides to search the darkest parts of the city to find answers. After making unexpected friends and pushing herself to limits she never knew she had, Charlotte must decides whether shes willing to give up everything for the answers she seeks. Okay to be specific I need help with the name of the city my main character will be in and the name of an underground black market place as well. |
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SEscuadro Joined: 2012-04-24 Posts: 1386 |
1 year ago
@UnusDeo Thanks! :D |
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PickledIceCream Joined: 2011-09-24 Posts: 68 |
1 year ago
@UnusDeo What are you here for: Chapter/plot ideas Summary: (I cant post the summary because its to long! >o<) Additional Information: I've been having writers block for the 15th chapter of my story, http://www.wattpad.com/story/692499-the-barcode , and I need some help. Thanks a ton! |
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UnusDeo Joined: 2011-11-19 Posts: 283 |
1 year ago
@ThunderingResonance Gotcha. Send me an message that can sum up the last 14 chapters and I'll help as best I can. |
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UnusDeo Joined: 2011-11-19 Posts: 283 |
1 year ago
@IrisLock Give me a moment, I'll have some names for you soon . |
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KeptInShadows Joined: 2012-03-28 Posts: 975 |
1 year ago
♣ (Required) What are you here for (title, names, or feedbacks): A title ♣ (Required) Summary: Kyle, an average Britsh teenager, is assigned in class, of all things, pen pals. He is reluctant to do the assignment, while his American pen pal, Marsha, is thrilled. When Kyle moves to New Jersey, he meets Marsha, but they don't realize who the other is until later, which is after they start falling in love. ♣ (Required) Who you request for: @MissHoranette or @BettyxBoop6780 ♣ (Optional) Additional Information: |
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KeptInShadows Joined: 2012-03-28 Posts: 975 |
1 year ago
I'm back with a proper request :D |