I will critique your story or poem

Title: A Summer Song

Plot: After the classes ended, a seventeen-year-old student named Belle Collins gone home from the city. One day, the Collins gone to the beach since its summer. When Belle tries to swim farther away, a huge wave hits her and caused her to drown. Luckily, a guy saved her. In the hospital, they found out that the guy's name is Eric. Days passed, Belle was sent into a music school to learn more how to play guitar and she found her crush at that school. In the end, they discovered that their father loves another girl and their mother has cancer. Before their mother dies, she ordered to her children to forgive their father and live with him peacefully. But they think it's too late and impossible. This is a story of forgiveness and second chances.

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@MrsMadiStyles i really need an honest feedback ASAP http://www.wattpad.com/4313721-angel-on-shackles

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Just uploaded a new story which is probably different from what you'll usually find on Wattpad... http://www.wattpad.com/4327327-howl give it a go and please tell me what you think and how I can improve

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/844320-when-to-let-go

here's mine, hope you like! thanks in advance:)

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@MrsMadiStyles i would like if you looked at my story here's the link http://www.wattpad.com/story/1259346-mysterios-chair

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@MrsMadiStyles that sounds wonderful. I have a poem called BEHIND ENEMY LINES and a story called THE RISE AND FALL OF PHOENIX. They are both short so you could read both or only one if you'd like. Would like honest feedback. Thanks.

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Alright...So I have prologues done for three stories currently, and I'm not sure if I should keep going with any of them? You don't have to read them all, but they're only 1-3 pages each. Since these are only prologues, please ask any questions that you need to-obviously I'm leaving some things out on purpose because I plan to develop them later on in the story. Oh...and this is my first time writing prose...I'm a poet by nature...so these are all simply first attempts. Once again, you don't have to read them all...

Finding Spirits in Crowded Halls (Fantasy) http://www.wattpad.com/4326425-finding-spirits-in-crowded-halls

The Chance (Dystopian Romance) http://www.wattpad.com/story/1174902-the-chance

Renegades and Serenades (Sci-Fi) http://www.wattpad.com/story/1175131-renegades-and-serenades

~DNN

P.S. Renegades and Serenades and The Chance each also have a tentative first chapter. I'm just asking about the prologues right now...

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@MrsMadiStyles

http://www.wattpad.com/story/962211-little-n-large-watty-awards-2012

Nicole Crystal Welsh is starting her sophomore year at her California performing Arts school with the best social status possible- a floater. Someone popular enough to hang with the popular crowd yet still have the ability to sit with newbies or freshmen. In a place where looks are everything Nicole is beyond satisfied with her position when the inevitable happens- girl meets boy. Floaters are usually loners but Nicole is popular enough to make it work, that's not the issue. The problem is Caleb is a whopping 5'6 and Nicole is 6'1. In a place where looks are everything Nicole must find the strength to break the cookie cutter mold or lose everything she's ever worked for with a few bumps along the way.

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Night-time Fright http://www.wattpad.com/story/1266639-night-time-fright Thanks!

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1162271-creator

Fantasy #30 / Romance #643

Please read my story.

Thanks! ^_^

Hehehe.

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@MrsMadiStyles

Here's mine.

http://www.wattpad.com/3783202-step-1-you-parent-engage-you-without-your-consent?p=1#votes

The story follows the girl by the name of Khanak Singham. She's rich and always gets things the way she has wanted. In short, She's a happy citizen of the Great United States of America. That is until her father engages her to his best friend's son Zayn Malik. Khanak isn't happy and she'll go to any length to break the marriage; inconspicuously that is.

I would love some honest critique. Thank you so much for it.

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1220537-deception Thanks!

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please can you critique my first few chapters http://www.wattpad.com/story/1067491-twin-flames

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Hey I'd love for you to critique my story. I especially hope you enjoy reading it. Please, if your are going to read only one chapter, read Awkward Moment No. 1: Getting caught spying behind a skip.Tell me if it makes sense. Thanks for wanting to do this! http://www.wattpad.com/4195230-do-it-like-a-dude-awkward-moment-no-1-getting

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@MrsMadiStyles hey, if you don't mind could you check out my short story "Unwanted" and tell me your thoughts? thanks... :P

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I would love to have my short story torn apart.

Synopsis: It was the best birthday present he had ever gotten, a beautiful antique katana. But when strange accidents start happening and the cursed blade refuses to stay in its sheath, he has to make a decision - commit a bloody murder, or die a horrible death.

Rating: PG

Link: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1275168-honorbound

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thank you! :D

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1276142-the-greatest-gift

Kelsey is a humble small town girl who lives for marine life and wants nothing to do with the spotlight. Bobby is a high class actor who is adored by all and wants nothing to do with marine life. When these two come together by one boy, John, it brings up a tale of comedy, love, betrayal, and hope. Kelsey and Bobby are not supposed to be together according to every celebrity and journalist in Hollywood. Fans and even family members collide to keep Kelsey and Bobby apart, can these two lovers ignore their social class and find a way to be together? Or will fame and money keep them apart forever?

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Summary: This is just a story about a teenage girl named May. She's a senior in high school, and has everything a girl could ever dream of. She's living her life to the fullest and loving every bit of it, but what if all of that is about to change when she finds out things about herself that she had no idea was even possible. Could there be things beyond the supernatural that no one knew could ever exist, and if so, could a human be a part of all of it?

Fantasy/Other

Link/Bookcover:http:http://www.wattpad.com/3998438-enchanted-felines-chapter-one

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