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ZombieChika Joined: 2012-01-17 Posts: 429 |
1 year ago
Ive read... Shy girl has a gun (finished) Fast...Deadly...and Nerdy!?(ongoing) The first two are kickass by the wayx) |
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GIVEandTAKE Joined: 2011-10-09 Posts: 385 |
1 year ago
It's a paranormal but there is action nonetheless it's on my good friend's called "Teeth" or for published works try the "Daugther of Smoke and Bone" |
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ZombieChika Joined: 2012-01-17 Posts: 429 |
1 year ago
@xXxCupcakexXx Thnx i forgot to mention that i love to read paranormal books too!x) im writing one by the way:) |
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GIVEandTAKE Joined: 2011-10-09 Posts: 385 |
1 year ago
Cool is it posted? @Lups18 |
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GIVEandTAKE Joined: 2011-10-09 Posts: 385 |
1 year ago
Oh and her name is @XxXTwixXxX sorry about that. :} |
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ZombieChika Joined: 2012-01-17 Posts: 429 |
1 year ago
@xXxCupcakexXx yeah my story is posted its called 'Paranormal Love' and ok 4 the 2nd cmmt |
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GIVEandTAKE Joined: 2011-10-09 Posts: 385 |
1 year ago
All right I'll go to it. |
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ZombieChika Joined: 2012-01-17 Posts: 429 |
1 year ago
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GIVEandTAKE Joined: 2011-10-09 Posts: 385 |
1 year ago
Your welcome :) |
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ZombieChika Joined: 2012-01-17 Posts: 429 |
1 year ago
@xXxCupcakexXx Haha thanks no one reads it idk why and it makes me feel sad im like 'no one likes my story!? *tear**tear*' so what'd ya think of it? |
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GIVEandTAKE Joined: 2011-10-09 Posts: 385 |
1 year ago
I think is wonderful but you should add more details like when Alice touched her is she cold bland is she see-through and build a more creepy atmosphere to give the read a gory and dark feel. Other than that... it's wonderful. |
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ZombieChika Joined: 2012-01-17 Posts: 429 |
1 year ago
Oooo yeeeeeah...im not very good at adding detail...ya know mythical mixture ch1, i edited that to add more detail...the little ppl that actually care to inform me tell me i need detail, but thnx ill work on tht:D |
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TheOrangutan Joined: 2010-07-20 Posts: 16469 |
1 year ago
@Lups18 - Hi, I've moved your thread to Action Club as Essential Reads is for discussing published works rather than Wattpad stuff. You'll probably get more traffic there too. Thanks for your understanding. |
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Dionysus Joined: 2011-08-05 Posts: 177 |
1 year ago
Annnnnnnnnnnnnnnd, action! http://www.wattpad.com/story/1204552-the-trials-of-ares
"At this point all I was doing was working bone and blood into the concrete." The descent into madness and horror of a Veteran and the ensuing battles he faces with his own inner demons. A series I'm starting and currently working on, Action/Psych horror/ Regular horror, last two parts starting up in the next chapter I'm writing now. |
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ZombieChika Joined: 2012-01-17 Posts: 429 |
1 year ago
@TheOrangutan sure:) |
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ZombieChika Joined: 2012-01-17 Posts: 429 |
1 year ago
@Dionysus Sounds kickass! ill check it out x) |
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xWhiteLightning Joined: 2012-02-04 Posts: 1164 |
1 year ago
if you are looking for hard core action with a badass CIA operative and a threesome of cunning and deadly assassins then this is THE book for you. If you've read or seen the Jason Bourne stuff then i'll tell you it along those lines. @Lups18 Enshroud: An Avery Carter Novel By: Ryan Walker (rwalker) Genre: Thriller/Action Similar stories by these authors: Tom Clancy, Brad Thor, James Rollins, Vince Flynn, Robert Ludlum, Steve Berry, and of course the author of the Da Vinci Code Dan Brown Everything starts with the assassination of the Orthodox Patriarch in cold blood. From there a trinity of villainous terrorists come out from behind the curtain of the view of the modern world and began their deadly religious crusade backed by their millions of armed followers. Using terror tactics and assassinations, they coerce the political and religious scenes across the globe into total anarchy. Avery Carter and John Huxley are mobilized by the CIA's counter terrorism strike and investigation unit. Avery and John are thrust into a powerful global struggle with a determined force and they have to stop a looming World War III at any costs necessary. http://www.wattpad.com/story/1109804-enshroud-an-avery-carter-novel |
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ZombieChika Joined: 2012-01-17 Posts: 429 |
1 year ago
@rwalker YEAH!!!!!!!!!! IM SOOO READING THT!!!!!! XD THNX!!!!! |
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MisterSuz Joined: 2011-09-15 Posts: 3843 |
1 year ago
@Lups18 http://www.wattpad.com/story/1095422-an-untitled-story-about-a-botched-sting-%26 A Cop is bound to a chair in a Disney World Resort. Right on the other side of the table lies a psychotic mafia boss and a Glock toting monkey. The only thing the cop is wearing is Spongebob Underwear and bandages and stitches for gunshot wounds. Why are they here? Earlier in the day, The Cop is sitting in a Bell 206 Copter with the undercover police lieutenant and psychotic mafia thugs. Their destination: a hijacked cruise ship where a major gunfight is supposed to go down between gangs. Why are they here? An Action Thriller with some Dark Comedy. Enjoy :D |
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ZombieChika Joined: 2012-01-17 Posts: 429 |
1 year ago
@MisterSuz i swear where did all these stories come from!? ive never seen them!x) |
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MisterSuz Joined: 2011-09-15 Posts: 3843 |
1 year ago
@Lups18 From Wattpad, of course :D Anyways, here are some more if you want. They are about a Russian Hitman and they're supposed to be the start of a series. Enjoy :D http://www.wattpad.com/story/766738-red-friday http://www.wattpad.com/story/973243-officer-down-a-sequel-to-red-friday |
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ZombieChika Joined: 2012-01-17 Posts: 429 |
1 year ago
@MisterSuz k thnx:) |
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BlueElmo Joined: 2011-07-31 Posts: 5408 |
9 months ago
Fiona Love is her school’s head cheerleader. However, don’t let her looks and her social status fool you; she’s far from the stereotypical dumb blond bimbo. She’s dangerous. She’s not someone you want to mess with. Under that popular girl façade is one of the most feared and respected gang leaders, Fire. She hasn’t been the same ever since HE left, several years ago. Suddenly, there’s a mysterious new boy in school and her world is turned upside down. Damon Storm is leader to a well-known gang called the Bloody Skulls. He has the power, the money, the girls. He’s not a guy you want to cross roads with. He’s cruel and heartless ever since SHE left. Then, when he has to go to a new school because of some issues, there’s a certain girl that piques his interest. What happens when two of the most powerful gang leaders are attracted to each other? Will things take a turn for the best, or for the worst? |
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_madhattermusings Joined: 2012-08-02 Posts: 107 |
9 months ago
Title: New York By Knight Blurb:WHO SAID ANYTHING ABOUT CHIVALRY BEING DEAD? Ajax Knightley has never been what you would call a typical New York teenager. His extracurricular activities, instead of football practice and Model UN, include reading up on Medieval literature and fencing with his dad. A part of him wants to be the cool guy but most of the time, he's counting down the days till he is Knighted. From fencing to wrestling to martial arts, Ajax's classmates know him as the geek with insanely good reflexes. But Ajax's destiny goes far beyond winning a wrestling match.For generations, the Knightley family has protected the city of New York from dragons, sorcery, and other magical mayhem. Now it's Ajax's turn to carry on his family's legacy. Link: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1836692-new-york-by-knight |
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Segunda Joined: 2012-06-09 Posts: 285 |
9 months ago
@Mary_Madness Check out my work if you have the time. :) Mafia Princess
Eudrey lost her father three years ago. Now, she is in college and lives her life in peace. But her peace is about to shatter when strangers are going all out on killing her. Will she survive this sudden turn of events? Or will she end up dead before she even has the chance to escape from all of it? A world full of guns, knives, fights, deaths and dangerous men. For Eudrey, danger is just the best aphrodisiac. http://www.wattpad.com/story/1716462-mafia-princess (Copyright © 2012 Segunda) |