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@DrummerXChick please take some time reviewing my stories

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1235474-his-last-goodbye-a-sherlock-holmes-fanfiction

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1239682-my-immortal

you can choose either one. thank you :D yp

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Hey here’s my story! It’s a fantasy/adventure! It is called Strange Changes http://www.wattpad.com/3001337-strange-changes-chapter-1-self-defense Summary: In a world at war full of mythical creatures that will hunt you down and eat the second they lay eyes on you, how would you survive? For Avalon of Béke there is no choice but to become the toughest of the bunch. But what will happen when the consequences of so much power threaten the lives of her loved ones? Will she be able to hold onto her sanity? Please and Thank you! @DrummerXChick

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1183258-project-human-elimination

please be honest and cruel!! :)

Thanks :D

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I have two stories you can just chose whichever interests you the most. Thanks so much! =) The Dark Flame

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1135860-the-dark-flame

Summary: A more or less normal girl lived innocently, trying to find her place in the world. Until somebody killed everything she held dear. And now she needs revenge. But revenge comes at a price. A price that Dania is not certain she can afford.

Genre: Adventure and Mystery/Suspense

or Alexis in the Land of Zendor

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1034692-alexis-in-the-land-of-zendor

Summary: I look in the mirror and see my own two colourful eyes staring right back at me. They look normal enough to me. Unfortunately, normal enough doesn't cut it in the land of Zendor. Or what we used to call it, Earth. Since the 'meteor' arrived and caused so many mutations, eye colour decides everything. Gold eyes? Elite private school. Brown eyes? No school at all. A mixture of different colours? The only thing that awaits you is death. Especially if you're somebody like me, a girl who happens to have all 5 colours. That's not the way it should be. So I'm going to try to change these laws. Or die in the process.

Genre: Fantasy and Adventure

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1142287-sunshine

How could anyone find hope in world that is infested with zombies? The people you know are either dead or are walking the streets as an undead; a zombie. That's what Gretchen had to deal with. With the help from her older brother and best friend, she will find the courage to keep fighting and living another day. She will find what it means to actually live

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http://www.wattpad.com/4303628-the-voices Thank you so much for your help :)

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Unwanted and Taken

Summary: Gloria Livington, is a normal average everyday werewolf. Sure her only friends are Catherine her best friend, her brother, Kale, and her boyfriend, Trist. The rest of the pack are just selfish and cold to her. They tease, joke, and abuse her daily only when Trist is gone. Trist is her savior, the one who stopped the abuse put unto her. Suddenly, she finds her mate who rejects her right in front of a pack meeting. From then on her whole world spiraled down to an abyss. Feeling betrayed and humiliated, she flees from the meeting and into the forest only to be ambushed and taken away. Surprisingly, her whole world turns right side up, but not exactly the way she wanted it to. Now she's part of a secret werewolf organization that deals with rouges and all sorts of trouble. This wasn't what she wanted but what's meant to be is meant to be. But will she be able to face her past that's beginning to creep right back up to her?

Genres: Werewolf/Romance

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1258855-unwanted-and-taken

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1219905-birds-of-a-feather

Thanks!

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http://www.wattpad.com/4305987-in-sweeter-dreams-watty-awards-2012

Dreams. They are both wonderful and terrible. Wonderful because they can bring joy; hope. Terrible because they can tear you from the real world. Nightmares. Defeat; helplessness. You can do nothing but watch. Waking up in the middle of the night, gasping for breath, and crying. Desperate to stay awake. To save yourself from that pain. Meet Lyla. She's an ordinary girl who goes to a high school like everybody else her age. She blends in the crowds and nobody pays much attention to her. One fateful night, she encounters the last person she'd expect to be walking on Earth. Her dead grandfather. He informs her that she is one of a race that can control and take away other people's dreams and nightmares. He tells her of a prophecy. A prophecy that will change everything, with no which way of fixing itself.

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/904383-die-for-me thank you! :)

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@DrummerXChick My story is just starting and I want to know what to improve on so I could write a great story. Here's the link http://www.wattpad.com/4282326-when-she-cries

Thanks in advance and happy reading :)

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1233473-little-woods

It's just a prologue :) Thank you so much for helping out!

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@DrummerXChick If you like it, you vote it

"Just A Dare" (Watty Awards/Romance)

It was a mean thing to do, I admit. And I wasn't a mean person. But I did it anyways.

"It's just a dare," she said. "and it's not like you'll ever see them again." She persuaded me and I couldn't argue with her logic. I was moving across the state. So, I thought I would never see them again. You only live once, you know?

But I never knew that dare would make such a big impact on my life.

LINK: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1212867-just-a-dare

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1220187-the-death-staircase Thanks so much!

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There's only a couple of chapters so far, but I'd really appreciate your feedback. Thanks in advance. http://www.wattpad.com/story/1243682-a-version-of-events-book-1-raven

BLURB:

Hi I'm Raven and this is my version of events. Being of Non-Human status was fine in the Human world, it was when I was forced to move to the other realms that things started to get complicated. Vampires, Shifters, and Witches, oh my! Dorothy and Toto have got nothing on my adventure. I have recorded my journey through this crazy world filled with so much more than Humans can imagine. It might not be where the story began, because I don't think anyone remembers any more, but it starts the moment I stepped into the story. Follow me.

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My little gem of uncertainty that you can or can not read depending on your preference.

http://www.wattpad.com/4304117-alex

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@DrummerXChick i have two stories that I want to be in the Watty Awards. But Im not getting any ratings or anything. There new but I just need to know if their good enough...hm well here they are you can read either one! http://www.wattpad.com/story/1255097-the-baby-experiment

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1248732-the-vampires-slave

thankks!! ;)

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@DrummerXChick I really hope you can critic my story "Crazed", because it is later going to be in the process of MAJOR editing and all help would be greatly appreciated. though if it's harsh (which isn't a problem) I'd prefer a PM instead of a comment if you don't mind. Anyway, here's my link: http://www.wattpad.com/1902583-crazed-chapter-one

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1266235-daddy%27s-little-mutant

Sherrion is Daddy’s little mutant, always has been and always will be. When Daddy dies, what does the little girl do? When left with no one, who does she turn to? In a world riddled with powerful, transformed super humans and corrupted societies full of hate, how does she handle it? As Sherrion will find out very early in her existence, life isn’t all fun and games. Being Daddy’s little mutant isn’t easy, especially when Daddy is in your head.

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@DrummerXChick http://www.wattpad.com/4313721-angel-on-shackles i need a review and the pros and cons of this poem!!

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It's a finished short story of the horror genre. Enjoy.

Lou's life is hell. So are her nightmares. It's up to you to work out which is which. http://www.wattpad.com/3064492-torment-prologue

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Just uploaded a new story and would very much appriciate a critique! http://www.wattpad.com/4327327-howl hope you'll enjoy and find this interesting. Please tell me how to improve.

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/844320-when-to-let-go

here's mine, hope you like it, thanks in advance:)

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@DrummerXChick Hi! Here's my stry, hope u like it! U can skip the summary and head to the prologue Pls comment on both chapters. :)

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1222840-secluded-self-destruct

Thank u very much! I'll check urs too if I have time. :)

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Here's my story.

http://www.wattpad.com/4014901-burning-passion

Nova is your average 17 year old girl. She suffers from teenage dilemas, family dramas, and studying late each night to pass her exams. But then, she comes across a mysterious man and she can't help but feel drawn to him. Nova's never been into the "bad boy" type, but this guy might be her only exception. Weird things occur that are revolved around this guy. Although her gut instincts tell her to just walk away, she can't. Now, she's literally playing with fire and is at risk of changing her normal life once and for all.

Thank you in advance!

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