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The Chase

I could hear my heavy breathing as I sprint through the woods. Branches and vines are snagging me but I continue to run along because I know I can't stop. A man with a rifle is chasing me. Why is he coming after me? What did I do to him? Suddenly I hear a stick behind me snap and then I hear a loud *crack* as a bullet flies by my head. I sprinted faster then I ever did before but I knew the man was still in range with his gun to shoot me. I took a sharp right and jumped over a small rock when all of a sudden I was stopped by something. I tried to move forward but I couldn't. After a second I figured out what was wrong. My antler is caught on a tree branch and I can't pull it out. I knew I was done for.

Thank you for reading! That was one of my many short short stories I have written and I would love it if you could give me some help on how to make those stories better. :)

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what genre is your story?

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