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Go0d_LiF3o_O Joined: 2011-12-20 Posts: 137 |
1 year ago
Im always looking for a good novel to read and a lot of people don't update enough for me so if you want me to read your books then I would be happy to. If you want I will even give critism (only if you want it). Just post a link to your story below and I will try my hardest to read it as fast a possible and tell you what I think. Oh and I am pretty laid back when it comes to what I like to read, but I do have a few genres that I really don't enjoy reading. Sorry if you write books that are under these genres don't take offence I just don't enjoy all stories from these genres. Fristly, Vampires and Werewolves based novels, I just think it's a bit over done. Some are amazing but majority aren't that spectacular and it just seems like they are repeating themselves all the time. Next, Horrors or Thrillers I don;t like them because, I am a bit of a wuss and get freaked out by them, Sorry That's about it. x x |
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_TheVenomousSaga Joined: 2012-04-21 Posts: 69 |
1 year ago
@Go0d_LiF3o_O I've got a story! I hadn't upload that much yet though. It's less than a page. Only a preface....do you mind that? http://www.wattpad.com/story/1245237-the-venomous-monster The Venomous Monster-- that's what they call her. Her name is Serpina Snake, daughter of King Stefan and Queen Angel. How did Serpina earn the name? Well, when she was ten years old, her twin brother, Nicholas, had died. Nicholas died when he drank the red poison- a powerful potion that was suppose to conquer the whole world. Instead, he gets ill and dies. Furious about her brother's death, Serpina takes revenge on the school with her venomous kiss and runs away. Four years later, a girl named May Belle Tuck, daughter of Mother Nature, starts dreaming of Serpina. Serpina gives her a threat message and with that, May Belle becomes the chosen one. But can May Belle defeat the Venomous Monster before it's too late? |
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BeautifulDisaster214 Joined: 2012-02-15 Posts: 89 |
1 year ago
http://www.wattpad.com/story/1021224-bucket-of-kisses-watty-awards-2012 Thanks so much for doing this :) |
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TheMadHatteress Joined: 2012-02-25 Posts: 851 |
1 year ago
He was leaning in too close now; I could feel the sweet warm breaths coming from his mouth. He knew. And he was going to threaten me with it. "I have a secret," he whispered. His hands wrapped around my waist, and I found my heart beating faster and faster; A hummingbird heart. "We both know your a cheater," he said, smirking with the corners of his lips. "But that's not the secret." He leaned in closer to my ear. "The secret is that I'm a cheater too." http://www.wattpad.com/story/1177870-cheaters Thanks so much! |
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Poindexter Joined: 2011-08-22 Posts: 4031 |
1 year ago
@Go0d_LiF3o_O Thanks, please tell me what you think
Ethel and Eli are twins on the brink of separation. While nearing the age seventeen Eli knows he is to be drafted into the Union Army and fight against his younger sibling, who ran away to join the Confederates. The only way the twins can hope to be together is if they take an invitation to work for the eccentric and strange Dr. Abner Edwards. Seems simple enough, right? But Dr. Edwards has a secret, one that involves a world that might just live right beneath the ground, a negro who claims to have powers to see the unseen, and an exotic boy who claims to be from the future. How will the twins survive with an angry mob running after Eli, odd creatures attacking the patients, a civil war of another world effecting their own, or troubles with the time-space continuum? Never mind that, it's time for tea. |
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AkeeshaSWilliams Joined: 2011-03-10 Posts: 573 |
1 year ago
See, I don't have any covers. And stuff. But still feel free to check mine out. http://www.wattpad.com/story/1232452-faking-it-sequel-to-taken-watty-awards-2k12 |
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JodiusFuqua Joined: 2012-04-03 Posts: 427 |
1 year ago
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Love_Albrecht Joined: 2012-02-21 Posts: 2361 |
1 year ago
Will you please check mine out and let me know what you think of it? :) thank you oh so very much! :D ---Love <3 |
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PhoenixBird Joined: 2011-03-01 Posts: 32 |
1 year ago
http://www.wattpad.com/story/1246164-eyes-open-don%27t-forget-to-breathe Please do read, I really want to have some feedback since this is one of my first romance stories :) |
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LouisTwerksIt Joined: 2012-01-05 Posts: 1724 |
1 year ago
If you could give me some feedback it would be greatly appreciated. :) http://www.wattpad.com/story/1236484-the-jungle *This story takes place in the year 2023.* Archer and Elora mysteriously wakes up in a jungle. Unsure of how they got there or why they are there, they have to stay alive in order to get out. They need to watch out for predators, poisonous plants, and maybe even other kids their age. Who knows what's in store for them? Only select people know what's going on and are using it for their own entertainment. |
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UAusten Joined: 2010-06-28 Posts: 1854 |
1 year ago
Something out of the ordinary is happening at Celestine Heights... Ever since she got hit by lightning that almost killed her, Stella Miles has been going through insidious changes. Changes that made her best friend afraid of her, and her boyfriend passive-aggressive towards her. Then there was the guy she saved from certain death, and his weird effect on her. Why, almost from the get-go, was she intimately drawn to him? And more importantly, as their lives increasingly got tangled in unexplainable events, what did his arrival mean to everyone in Celestine Heights? Please click on the cover to read story: Hope you enjoy it. Thanks! |
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thestoryofmylife1 Joined: 2012-01-14 Posts: 269 |
1 year ago
In a Perfect World http://www.wattpad.com/story/897765-in-a-perfect-world Brittany Walsh had everything she could ever ask for, until her boyfriend, Damien, got her pregnant. It's been almost a year since Brittany left town and so much has changed. Her daughter, Hayley, is four months old and Damien has no idea that Hayley exists. When Brittany returns home after almost a year away, her secret begins to fall apart as she and Damien reconnect. Brittany kept Hayley a secret for so long, how is Damien going to feel once he finds out he has a daughter and what is going to happen to their relationship? If you could give a criticism that would be great, thanks so much! |
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bubblegum2306 Joined: 2011-08-21 Posts: 784 |
1 year ago
What happens when your parents force and blackmail you into doing something that you have never wanted? What if it’s something as personal as marriage? Meet Amesh, a 25 year old man, who has a steady job, rich parents and a different girl every other day. And meet Nupur, sweet, innocent but who is already in love with another man. What happens when these two are thrown together into so-called married life? Would they forever hate each other? Or would their feelings morph into something much stronger? http://www.wattpad.com/story/1111321-arranged-love-marriage-watty-awards-2012 http://www.wattpad.com/story/1173937-the-martini-shot Hey check these stories out plz ... Both of them are set in an Indian background ... I've just started writing them but I hope u enjoy them :) vote and leave a comment if u do ;) Thanks |
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BlackIshAColor14 Joined: 2011-08-15 Posts: 290 |
1 year ago
@Go0d_LiF3o_O Hey I was wondering if you could check out my story, only seven short chapters so far, and critique it please. http://www.wattpad.com/story/866805-sunshine-girl |
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Yerdonn Joined: 2011-11-21 Posts: 23 |
1 year ago
http://www.wattpad.com/2750871-broken-silence-title-page Heres my link. I am hoping to finish it in time for the awards. Please read! Give me feedback if you can! |
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VampBirdie01 Joined: 2011-02-26 Posts: 75 |
1 year ago
http://www.wattpad.com/story/1237974-broken-before-bound-watty-awards-2012 Can you pretty please read it?!? It's getting longer per day, because i've got pre-done chapters ready, but it's starting to get too quick, and im running out of pages to upload!! :P anyway, I would LOOOVE comments, feedback, the whole lot!! There are NOT very many people reading it, so feedback would mean the world!! Thanks a bunch, it's very appreciated! xox |
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DayuumSwaggPeace Joined: 2012-04-01 Posts: 3 |
1 year ago
http://www.wattpad.com/4053577-unbreakable-mates pls read you will love it if you love werewolves |
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LouisTwerksIt Joined: 2012-01-05 Posts: 1724 |
1 year ago
http://www.wattpad.com/story/1236484-the-jungle *This story takes place in the year 2023.* Archer and Elora, both mysteriously wake up in a jungle. Unsure of how they got there or why they are there, they have to stay alive in order to get out. They need to watch out for predators, poisonous plants, and maybe even other kids their age. Who knows what's in store for them? Only select people know what's going on and are using it for their own entertainment. |
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audaciousmind Joined: 2011-11-26 Posts: 214 |
1 year ago
Here are my stories :) They are being added in the
WATTY AWARDS 2012 You're support would be greatly appreciated..Thank you in advance. One story is A CLICHE ROMANCE THAT HAS TWISTS It's cute The other story is A TEEN NOVEL WITH SUSPENSE
http://www.wattpad.com/2835479-hopeless-situation-rejected Nathan Turner is hopelessly in love with Alexis Sterling, and when asked if she would marry him... Alexis said no. His parents are expecting him to bring home a fiancée and soon to be wife. Nathan needs to find a girl, who for a day has to pretend to be his fiancée. Having no other option, he decided to take Sophie Walters, part time worker at 'Bill and Jill's Burgers' home to his family. The problem is she hates him, and he hates her... So how on earth do they end up getting married? Sophie needs to make sure Nate marries Alexis, she can earn enough cash to go where she's supposed to, and they can all get out of this situation.
Ethan Lively is one of the top businessmen around. He has the money, the looks, and all the ladies seem to be crushing on him. Ethan also has a beautiful girlfriend that has been with him for quite some time. Their relationship started off perfect, but one day he come's home and just doesn't feel the sparks anymore. The reason may be because he met Christina Evans- his childhood crush, in his office the morning of. All he ever can think about is her. The only problem is that Christina is his best friend's fiancée. Follow Ethan as he gets a better understanding of relationships, and learns what truly was never his to keep. |
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gtothe Joined: 2012-02-07 Posts: 262 |
1 year ago
LEATHER APRON (Wattys 2012 Entry) Part of a collection of Flash Fiction pieces (500 words or less). Critiques and general observations, welcome. Below is a link to the collection as well…if you’re keen ;) http://www.wattpad.com/4042834-leather-apron-watty-awards-2012-entry
500 Words In The Making A collection of short stories written in 500 words or less. http://www.wattpad.com/story/1172330-500-words-in-the-making-a-work-in-progress |
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_Anne29 Joined: 2011-07-06 Posts: 34 |
1 year ago
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_SingDanceLive Joined: 2011-04-18 Posts: 427 |
1 year ago
@Go0d_LiF3o_O heyy, this is the link to my story: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1249458-our-song When summer arrives Kesha can't wait to fly over to her best friend's house and spend the whole summer with her. They've planned everything on the phone and now they can't wait to put everything into action. But what happens when Kesha finds out she's not the only guest at the Meeler's house? Will she get along with the unknown guest, or will they hate each other? It's a story about love, dreams and second chances. Can you please check it out?? thanks =)) Oh and I'd love for you to give me some feedback if you want to!! =)) |
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_justmemyselfandigwen Joined: 2012-04-02 Posts: 134 |
1 year ago
@Go0d_LiF3o_O I was wondering if you could give your insights on my story. I'm thinking on putting this for the Watty Awards 2012 but I don't know if it'll be worthy. :) I hope you can buy time to read it. :) Thanks.:) Title: Special Attachment Genre: Romance, Teen Fiction Link: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1160362-special-attachment-ongoing-series |
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GottaReadMe Joined: 2011-10-21 Posts: 437 |
1 year ago
"Just A Dare" (Watty Awards/Romance) It was a mean thing to do, I admit. And I wasn't a mean person. But I did it anyways. "It's just a dare," she said. "and it's not like you'll ever see them again." She persuaded me and I couldn't argue with her logic. I was moving across the state. So, I thought I would never see them again. You only live once, you know? But I never knew that dare would make such a big impact on my life. |
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SubwayStars Joined: 2011-04-25 Posts: 1137 |
1 year ago
@Go0d_LiF3o_O It's only a short story. :) Thank you so much! ![]() Short Story || Romance Strong is what real love is. Strong is loving that person even after the heartbreak. They met at a musical auditorium and he was at once in love with her. A ridiculous twist of fate decides to keep them crossing paths with each other, but as funny as it may sound, they are destined to never be together. Will the day come when walls are pushed away and instead bridges are built and both River and Eli are crossing to get to each other? |