♠ ♥ ♣ ♦House of Cards: In Need Of Help? Come On In♦ ♣ ♥ ♠ [OPEN!]


  • UnusDeo
    UnusDeo
    1 year ago

    @happylittleava . . . I'm sorry, I can't do it. There's nothing that beats a fist-bump. NOTHING!

    Bump!

  • RibbonsOfRainSang
    RibbonsOfRainSang
    1 year ago

    ♣ (Required) What are you here for (title, names, or feedbacks): Feedback, please, especially instructive criticism. Don't be afraid to be brutally honest.

    ♣ (Required) Summary: Enter the world of Iris May. She can be considered a bit peculiar.. Odd, different, puzzling. No one quite understands her, except maybe Robot Boy. Read as she stuggles to face- or ignore- love, hate, life and death in a way just as unique as herself.

    ♣ (Required) Who you request for: I'm fine with anyone, but I guess @CookieMonsters432 or @BettyxBoop6780, please.

    ♣ (Optional) Additional Information: The stories called 'I am Iris'. That's some prety important information... xD Here's the link:

    http://www.wattpad.com/3870304-i-am-iris-chapter-one

  • UnusDeo
    UnusDeo
    1 year ago

    @AllyLautner If Cookie or Betty don't show within 12-24 hours, I'll be happy to help you.

  • RibbonsOfRainSang
    RibbonsOfRainSang
    1 year ago

    @UnusDeo If you want, you can just help me as soon as you can. I honestly don't care who helps. :)

  • TonyThomas4
    TonyThomas4
    1 year ago
  • raghooda
    raghooda
    1 year ago

    hey ... could u help me find a name for my character

    his father sealed his feelings when he was young , he thought it will make his son stronger since he was thinking about making him join the Aei forces (they are explained in the story ) , then he killed his father then joined a team in the Aei forces were he met his team leader ( zephyr ) who insists to help him get his feelings back even if he is not appreciating her help ........until he falls in love

    most of times he is mean, gloomy , heartless ,and sadistic but sometimes he is helpful , I thnk if the name seemed dark or evil it will fit him more :)

    he is in a fantasy , adventure , and very little humor and romantic story , if that matters ;)

  • American_Life
    American_Life
    1 year ago

    ♣ (Required) What are you here for (title, names, or feedbacks): Title and Plot help.

    ♣ (Required) Summary: I need help with that. But all I have is a man name Kane and he's in the army and fell in love with a girl named Katie while off duty and now he has to go back.

    ♣ (Required) Who you request for: @UnusDeo

    ♣ (Optional) Additional Information: N/A

  • UnusDeo
    UnusDeo
    1 year ago

    @American_Life Happy to help anytime I can.

    Here's some titles first:

    -Called to Serve

    -Love Under Fire

    -Siege Love

    -Warring Hearts

    -Bound by Duty

    More available upon request.

    As for plot, you should expand on his experiences in the war, while at the same time, expand on how it is to be in love with an active soldier for her. I can give more detail if you need it.

  • American_Life
    American_Life
    1 year ago
  • UnusDeo
    UnusDeo
    1 year ago
  • raghooda
    raghooda
    1 year ago

    You didn't answer my request!!!!

  • raghooda
    raghooda
    1 year ago

    ♣ (Required) What are you here for (title, names, or feedbacks): a name for a character

    ♣ (Required) Summary: his father sealed his feelings when he was young , he thought it will make his son stronger since he was thinking about making him join the Aei forces (they are explained in the story ) , then he killed his father and joined a team in the Aei forces were he met his team leader ( zephyr ) who insists to help him get his feelings back ,after she saw a vision of him staving her ( her visions usually come true)even if he is not appreciating her help ........until he falls in love

    most of times he is mean, gloomy , heartless ,and sadistic but sometimes he is helpful , I thnk if the name seemed dark or evil it will fit him more :)

    ♣ (Optional) Additional Information: he is in a fantasy , adventure , and very little humor and romantic story , if that matters.

  • UnusDeo
    UnusDeo
    1 year ago

    @raghooda So, wait, he's going to fall in love without his feelings?

    Anywho, how about Connor? Zachariah (Or Zac)? Jonah?

  • Mariannellie
    Mariannellie
    1 year ago

    @BettyxBoop6780: Can you please help, I can't seem to think of anything more romantic to happen in my story, I'm all out of humor and ideas for the next chapter and how to end my story, also the definition of my story, its just not good enough and also my cover, it looks ugly. I NEED LOTS OF HELP, since you major in Romance and some HUMORE, helppp meeeeee...

  • UnusDeo
    UnusDeo
    1 year ago

    @Mariannellie For record-keeping, we'll need you to fill out the form on the first post. She should be of great help to help you. =)

  • AutisticAlice
    AutisticAlice
    1 year ago

    ♣ (Required) What are you here for (title, names, or feedbacks): Chapter ideas and Plot help

    ♣ (Required) Summary: Mina is not like other girls. She has no idea what her past is. Her memory feels lost in all the daydreams, hallucinations and delusions of a wonderland that doesn't exist. Bullied and abused her whole life by schools and parents from her past life she doesn't remember. Mina has no idea what her life is. Nothing from her past exists but the hallucinations and delusions she has. Could she be Alice's reincarnation? Could Alice even be the mother she knows nothing about? Is there a connection to what she sees that no one else believes exists? How much will she suffer before things start to look up? Will she ever be able to discover her true past?

    ♣ (Required) Who you request for: Uh... I don't really know. I guess either @ScarletDice?

    ♣ (Optional) Additional Information: My plot is really weird and kind of disorganized. I kind of suck at creating plots so... I was hoping there was a way to clean it up and make it much easier for me and others to understand. I also need ideas for my third chapter. I'm suffering writer's block, ugh.

  • ScarletDice
    ScarletDice
    1 year ago

    @AutisticAlice Hm, I'm not really sure if we help with plots or not, but sure! I'll help you.

    Okay, so your character is Alice (or a reincarnation/daughter of) from the book Alice in Wonderland. Some ideas are: do you want this to be all in her mind (as in she has mental issues. No problem in that) or if she really is somehow related to Alice, as in the story character who could turn out to be a real person who either:

    A) Also suffers from mental issues i.e Mina's mother or another person with the same condition

    or

    B) A fictional character who Mina hallucinates she is. I can personally see many ways to go with this as it has many possibilities for plots and so on.

    First off, I need to ask you if you would rather talk about this over PM. Secondly, you need to choose one of the above that matches your taste, then we could continue with this, okay? After that, we would move onto your ideas for Chapter Three considering I have not read your story and therefore does not know where you are.

    PM me if you want to work this that way. ^ ^

  • raghooda
    raghooda
    1 year ago

    @UnusDeo he is going to start to feel again with time then fall in love, it will make more sense after I finish writing it :-) And thanks for help

  • AutisticAlice
    AutisticAlice
    1 year ago

    @ScarletDice I would like that but for right now, my mind is shot and I have to go to rest and relax. I don't want to overdo it or my anxiety will act up. XD So I'll message you tomorrow. ><;

  • UnusDeo
    UnusDeo
    1 year ago
  • AutisticAlice
    AutisticAlice
    1 year ago

    ♣ (Required) What are you here for (title, names, or feedbacks): names

    ♣ (Required) Summary: Fourteen year old twins Anya and Olivia Willow have no idea what there mother was or what she was like nor can anyone tell them anything about her. Their father is constantly drunk and always abusive towards them. To make things worse, the girls go through odd changes they can't even begin to explain. Their discovery? They are cat girls with an ability to transform into a cat or normal human. Can the twins figure out their past? How will they survive these changes? What more could go wrong for them?!

    ♣ (Required) Who you request for: @UnusDeo (or at least someone who might help. I didn't see anyone else there who could help me. ><)

    ♣ (Optional) Additional Information: Actually... scratch that. I need help with a few good and more unique names for their father. I suck at coming up with male names that click with me. >_<

    (You guys are helpful so that's why I came back. XD)

  • UnusDeo
    UnusDeo
    1 year ago

    @AutisticAlice I'll help the best I can.

    -Artemis

    -Ezekiel

    -Zachariah

    -Steven

    -James

    -Maxwell

    Got more if you need them.

  • AutisticAlice
    AutisticAlice
    1 year ago

    @UnusDeo Artemis sounds like a good name. Thanks. ^^

  • escapingreality28
    escapingreality28
    1 year ago

    um hi...was hoping if you could help me

    ♣ (Required) What are you here for (title, names, or feedbacks): feedbacks.

    ♣ (Required) Summary: ( Alice in DOOMSLAND) 19 year-old Alice was always the odd one in her perfect family. Having successful parents and Barbie as you're sister can be tough. Instead of learning how to dance ballet or shop for the perfect outfit, Al would rather handle guns and read 101 ways on how to survive a zombie invasion. Now the world we once know is in ruins and is now ruled by the Red Queen. Alice together with her best friend Jack who may be as mad as the Hatter and her pet cat Cheeswick who can be twisted as Cheshire may be the worlds only hope. Along their journey they will meet allies who will aid in their quest and of course enemies who will stop at nothing to fulfill their queen's orders. KILL ALICE.

    ♣ (Required) Who you request for: @UnusDeo and @BettyxBoop6780

    (Optional) Additional Information: I'm only a rookie so it may not the best. I'm also struggling with the grammars so i haven't posted any other chapters. Hope you can give me new ideas and please do criticize it as honestly as you can but do say it nicely. Thank you!

  • happylittleava
    happylittleava
    1 year ago

    Bump... @UnusDeo I wonder why you get all the requests.. Lol :P

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