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ItsKatie Joined: 2011-11-14 Posts: 461 |
1 year ago
I need help with my story. I need more action in it. I SUCK at writing action. :P So any advice? Or maybe you could write one for me? :D |
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rokmc87 Joined: 2011-04-27 Posts: 522 |
1 year ago
@ItsKatie Care to explain in further detail? |
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ItsKatie Joined: 2011-11-14 Posts: 461 |
1 year ago
In my book Something New, its very bland to me. I need more action. like someone attacks Alex or trys to attack Sam. ect. I cant write action to save my life! so i need help :P |
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MisterSuz Joined: 2011-09-15 Posts: 3854 |
1 year ago
@ItsKatie I'll check it out now. |
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TheOrangutan Joined: 2010-07-20 Posts: 17521 |
1 year ago
@ItsKatie - this might be useful - http://www.wattpad.com/forums/discussion/161816/Writing+a+Fight+or+Battle+Scene...+How+to+Start Cheers, Gav |
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ItsKatie Joined: 2011-11-14 Posts: 461 |
1 year ago
Thanks :D @TheOrangutan @Suzboy98 |
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TheOrangutan Joined: 2010-07-20 Posts: 17521 |
1 year ago
@ItsKatie - no worries =] |
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ItsKatie Joined: 2011-11-14 Posts: 461 |
1 year ago
bump |
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xWhiteLightning Joined: 2012-02-04 Posts: 1165 |
1 year ago
do you still need help, its been a month @ItsKatie |
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ItsKatie Joined: 2011-11-14 Posts: 461 |
1 year ago
Kinda... @rwalker |
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xWhiteLightning Joined: 2012-02-04 Posts: 1165 |
1 year ago
So what do you help on? I'm an action writer. Maybe you could look at my stories to see kinda how it works. Now of course u dont have to its just a suggestion @ItsKatie |