good mystery story

what are your favourites?

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On wattpad? My favorite on here is When a Girl Gets Tortured...a brief summary in case your interested in reading it :)

She made a sound and he shivered. It sounded like a wounded animal. No, it sounded more then that; like someone fighting to live.

Zeke is windblown when he meets Shyloh. He knows something is wrong with her, that something has happened to put shadows in her eyes. What’s worse is that his parents know who she is, and she had JUST moved to Branson! After the last year, Shyloh is having a really hard time trying to live a normal life. It’s also hard when you have someone searching for you, wanting to use you for his own pleasures and needs. Her brother, Spencer, is one of the most supporting people she knows. But until she meets Zeke--caring, dangerous, understanding Zeke, does she actually start to feel like she isn’t dirty and tainted, and can actually let her guard down around him. Right when they have started to realize their love, though, Shyloh is taken once again.

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Sherlock Holmes, what else?

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Check my story out, it's a short mystery. I would really appreciate to hear what you think about it. If you do thanks.

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Hey check my story out too! It's called Like Conscious Guilt Personified.

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The Girl With The Dragon Tattoo, duhhh :)

I like mine too, so check it out if you ever get the chance

http://www.wattpad.com/2267841-smoke-me-out-prologue

The story of five friends.Diana, Luke, Alex, Jane and Kyle. Life seems perfect until a certain troubled girl kills herself. Suddenly everything seems different. No one can be trusted. She reveals deep dark secrets that no one is prepared for..

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http://www.wattpad.com/1916419-death-is-only-the-beginning-bk-1-in-the-death

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through the gates of limbo its new but really fits the category :) http://www.wattpad.com/2553040-through-the-gates-of-limbo#

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http://www.wattpad.com/2769027-i-spit-on-your-grave

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http://www.wattpad.com/1445169-of-lockets-and-lies Rowena Harding is almost eighteen, the age where every girl should become a woman and her 'season', the time to find a suitor, is official. She needs answers, however-she knows nothing of her birth, her becoming rich and living with her supposed Aunt, and does not understand the strange occurrences that happen to her-which are becoming frequent as she reaches eighteen. Adrian Forge is a man with a history-full of women, sailing, and grief-but is brought to earth when he finds out his father is ill. The cure is uncertain, but it comes at a price-what will he do to heal his beloved father? Both need answers, and in needing so, embark on a path better left untouched... >>>>UPDATED: NEW CHAP. 12!!!<<<<<

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Link: http://www.wattpad.com/2593703-death-reincarnation-and-resurrection-1-the-move-in

Death, Reincarnation and Resurrection

a mystery, evolving romance story

What if your life was marked with death, that you didn’t have a real life and that you were just a spirit occupying a body that never really belonged to you, that you were just a relic waiting for is true owner to take it.

Nicole changed her all life to have a successful carrier moving to Romania, the worst decision she had ever made, because once she moved there death clock started to tick and she emerged in a world that she could only imagine in horror films and books.

What would you do if death lived inside of you and you couldn’t escape her? Well, there’s always a light in the bottom of the darkness, maybe the dead can live again by Reincarnation and Resurrection and fight for what once was their.

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Title: Step by Step http://www.wattpad.com/2997945-step-by-step

Laura, Lou and Marc are best friends, and one day they're out having fun when they stumble across a dead body. From that moment on, Laura keps noticing more and more dead bodies of people who have recently spoken to her. Lou realises that Laura has a stalker, so Laura needs to find out who it is, before the stalker kills someone really close to her, 'cos -who knows who'll be next...??

Vote&Comment Pleaseeeeeee =]

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http://www.wattpad.com/2980874-la-antica-amor-ancient-love-high-academy-series

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Fantasy/ Adventure/ Mystery/ Action/ Romance, etc. : http://www.wattpad.com/2792750-somnia-discordant-lullaby by revengefulkarma

Adventure/Mystery/Suspense: http://www.wattpad.com/3036699-what-lies-below-prologue by CarlitosETX

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@KIDmimi If you'd like, check out mine :D The mystery's just started :D

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http://www.wattpad.com/3399776-haunting-on-malbury-st-part-2 The final addition of HOMS is here... Mysteries within the Tealins family unravels including one little girl is really brave to face spirits. the two, Gunter Tealin and Ivy Autospring. What will happen? only time will tell..

And

http://www.wattpad.com/3399137-haunting-on-malbury-st-part-1 You think a family of four would be living in a lowly haunted house, wrong. On Malbury street, there's a house built on land that bore a large building containing spirits/people who committed suicide before it had been burnt down by Chicago's great fire. Five years later after that, a house is built over it.

135 years later, A new family moves in the old house..only discovering what the previous family had endured

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http://www.wattpad.com/2841121-heavy-rains-inferno-part-1-chapter-1

Grey Boone, the worlds greatest detective. This is fact, not opinion. Grey Boone flipped cases like pancakes, one right after another a success. He's known for his superior intelligence all across the globe, solving cases left and right. What's even more impressive is that he is just in his early twenties. Some worshiped him, some wish they knew where he was so they could kill him. Reasons varied for both, but this didn't phase him in the bit. In fact, many things didn't phase him.

Not many knew the man that lied behind the brain. A boy beaten and tortured because of his Multiple Personalities. A boy abandoned to an orphanage at the age of six. A boy who was raised to become the genius they knew he could be, and to do this they had to cure him of his mental disorder.

Now as a detective, he will take on his most difficult case yet. But as his condition slowly begins to come back in the midst of his new case, he begins to question himself. How can he solve a case if he regards himself as the prime suspect?

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http://www.wattpad.com/2294984-31-days-prologue

It took me 31 days to lose everything i had.31 days to change my life.31 days to make me run away from myself forever..

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This is my book, but unfortunately it's just the beginning, introducing the characters and all that jazz haha! :D

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@KIDmimi My favorite is He Saved Me by @Xenia_Hopps :) Also another good one is To Turn Left by @emilytaylorinkie (hoping I spelled that right xD ) They both kind of inspired the mystery I'm writing in their own little ways...

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please read mine :D

http://www.wattpad.com/3621507-premonition-oneshot

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Hi! here is my new story! Willow is a 15 year old girl. She visits her friend Caroline reguarly. Caroline is in Wilden Institution for mental reasons and loves talking to Willow. One Friday night Willow is there later then usual. Willow learns the hard way as to why everyone hates Wilden so much. Wilden has dark secrets that only the patients know of. No one comes out, atleast not alive.

http://www.wattpad.com/3680108-locked-in-pain-chapter-1

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@KIDmimi http://www.wattpad.com/4162281-strange-addictions-watty-awards-2012-strange

Jazzy has been in love with Blake for as long as she can remember and now that he finally notices her all he wants to do is...kill her?!

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check out my story its a horror mystery story though ive only got a prologue so far which is two pages.

http://www.wattpad.com/4131029-like-a-virgin-on-hold

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In the hidden: Grace Paltrow's mother, father, and little sister died in a house fire 3 years ago. But this wasn't an accident...and they are coming for her next. Why did this happen? How will it all play out? This is a suspense and mystery book with some action/fighting I'm sure you will enjoy! I only have the first chapter but I am waiting to update when i get more reads, votes, and comments.

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