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Would loved if you looked at this:

http://www.wattpad.com/story/625595-the-formal-arrangement

(:

give it your all (there is three chapters, but no, you don't have to read them all)

~ thanks <3

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Title: Till forever Ends Summary: Their story. The letter. The end.

It's a one shot! It's not long at all! Hope you get to check it out! http://www.wattpad.com/4428299-till-forever-ends

PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE CHECK IT OUT!! THANK YOU!

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Helloo!

I hope you enjoy this :) I would really appreciate some criticism, eheh.

Title: A Cure for the Blind

Genre: Mystery-Suspense/Romance

Description: If revenge is what you look for, please be wary of the path you choose, for it is a liar and cold and evil and more than gain, you will surely lose. If revenge is all you seek for, be well aware of its hidden cost, for it is treacherous, a wicked cheater, before you win, you already lost. If what you wish for is revenge, if its false promise is all you need, you'll be blind, your eyes will rotten, you'll be damned, a fool indeed. If revenge is the path you follow, you will pay with blood and bone. You will kill and celebrate your death, for all your sanity will soon be gone. If you ever carry this awful curse, then you're doomed and your soul abducted. Revenge is hungry and the blind hunter will more than often become the hunted.

Link: http://www.wattpad.com/story/914558-a-cure-for-the-blind

Thanks!*

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Do you mind criticizing my story Shattered?

here's the link...

http://www.wattpad.com/story/960703-shattered

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Eryn's ultimate goal was to look good for prom. When she didn't have the money to buy the dress she wanted, she was forced to take up a part time job at a cafe. That was when she met Dillan, a self-centered, rich brat, who's only working there for his father's sake. When Eryn and Dillan's personalities collide, all they wanted was to stay as far away from each other as possible. Little did they know, over time, they would start to feel otherwise.

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1320302-once-upon-a-twisted-fate

I hope you'll take a look at this and give some feedback :) it would be much appreciated.

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Hey there. :) If you still have time, I'd like you to read my work- Soul of the Phoenix. :) Hopefully you read at least past the first chapter, then if you think that the story is interesting enough, it's up to you if you want to read more. :) Here's the link. :) http://www.wattpad.com/story/443005-soul-of-the-phoenix Thanks in advance. :D

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Zioni Kevins is a sexy Navy Seals Latina that has it all but as she begins to find out, the life that she living was a lie. With her husband being hunted down by the United States Goverment, and a notorious weapon dealer on her trail, she has to use her military training to stay alive. Will she make it or will she end up being another BattleField Foe? http://www.wattpad.com/story/1257157-battlefield-foe Im open to all suggestions

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@BelieveTheCritique Hi could you critique a chapter of Midnight Disaster? Thanks!

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1205946-midnight-disaster-~watty-awards-2012~

Sidenote: This is not an ET story people will die!! Cameron and Maya are great friends (sometimes borderline dating) looking for something to keep them entertained in their annual summer adventure. Little do they know it comes to them in the form of an abandoned alien. At first their main concern is keeping him hidden from the public and their friends until they realize that something is really wrong with the alien. On the night of the full moon they discover their true problem. Their hometown is in grave danger.

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1321967-high-school-of-the-dead http://www.wattpad.com/4494182-the-white-woman Hope you enjoy ! :D

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Well, this isn't my first story that I've written and of course it's 1 in the morning when I come up with my best ideas, but they just don't seem to come with the best quality..anywho I was wondering if you could check out my latest story Chasing the Sun :)

Here's the link. http://www.wattpad.com/story/1364506-chasing-the-sun

Thank you. Dani♥

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1354022-my-hard-10-neighbor

An nerd Nikki meets a new neighbor, he's a perfect boy. but her lack of confidence, and it make her pick away from relationship

genre : Romance, teen fiction, Humor

Read mine please :D it's on going

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@BelieveTheCritique Here's the link: http://www.wattpad.com/1921349-the-dragon-tattoo Thanks a bunch!:)

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@BelieveTheCritique http://www.wattpad.com/story/1304764-these-roses-of-mine

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@BelieveTheCritique I haven't finished posting this story but i would love the first two chapters to be criticized. Thank you. (http://www.wattpad.com/story/1247456-first-fate-the-forgotten-love)

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Hello! Umm. If its okay, I hope you can read my story? Called Hidden Gem?http://www.wattpad.com/story/1316062-hidden-gem

I'd appreciate it a lot if you gave me feedback about it. :D

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Please critique this? :)

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1333513-live-love-laugh-dream-and-everything-in-between

A collection of short stories - from a girl trapped in the wild for survival, to a ghost reminiscing about her past memories and a gang demanding a curious object.

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I'm only starting but could you read "Shattered"

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1415040-shattered

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1415581-death%27s-toll thanks

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Thank you, awesome wattpadder, for being generally awesome.

Red

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Hey! Could you please read my story so far? I’d really appreciate it a lot. :)

Haven Summers is a fun loving girl. She sings in the rain and believes that every rainbow leads to a pot of gold. She’s loud and crazy, but sweet and understanding when needed. Her happy ways has her best friend falling at her feet with pure love, but her eyes are set on one and one person only, Dalton Jones. The guy every girl wants to have. The star quarterback and star academic achiever. To Haven, it’s an act of destiny for them to be together and when Haven finally gets the guts to confess her love for him, he rejects her like a piece of trash; cold and cruel. It leaves Heaven heartbroken and humiliated. The thing is Haven likes to die hard. She means war. Haven Summers is out for revenge and revenge she will get. But what happens if on her journey she finds out her heart is not the only one that’s been abused? What if she finds herself spiralling in love with him all over again and more?

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1409842-don%27t-go-breaking-my-heart

Thanks a bunch <3

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Hi ^^ i'm new to the whole write your own story thing and I was wondering if you could read my story and tell me what you think about. The story is about werewolves and will have romance later on in the story. This is where you can read it http://www.wattpad.com/story/1399883-a-mother%27s-hatred-and-a-father%27s-love

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http://www.wattpad.com/4775706-hitchhiker-part-one http://www.wattpad.com/4775864-hitchhiker-part-one-hitchhiker-part-two Hi, would love some feedback....and from anyone else in here too! Much appreciated :)

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@BelieveTheCritique

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/943080-tracing-echoes @BelieveTheCritique thank you in advance =)

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