Writer's Workshop

what are these workshops? do we just submit what we have for someone to read? i m working on a book and could use some help with it. if that is possable that is...??

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@LarissaAnnGimlett Hey! Well, basically you just do it for the whole learning experience, but if you wanted to submit what you have done in a private message I'd be happy to go over it and give you a few pointers.

As for the book, email it to jess_verynx@hotmail.com and I'll do a quick edit on it :)

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@Pineapple2141 I miss you. I'm going to go check the Workshop.

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Aaaaand those sentences sounded so unbalanced with each other.

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I want to join, but I just want to clarify what I'm doing. I do the activity you post and then email it to you, or do I post it in the comment section in your story/workshop like I see so many people doing.

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this sounds good, I always have problem with building character!

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@Butterflyfun You can do either. The only reason that you would email it to me is if you want a REALLY, REALLY thorough criticisism, provided by myself. Otherwise, you can do the exercises for self improvement, or showcase your work in the comments! :)

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is it too late to join? and do i email it to you and you email feedback back? or how does it work? lol. thx!

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@SmileLoveHappiness It's NEVER too late to join! Welcome to the Workshop!

As for the exercises, you can do one of three things:

1. You can complete the exercises for yourself

2. You can email them to me if you want some (very harsh) critical advice

3. You can put them in the comments section and show them off without me being a big nasty ogre :)

Hope that helps!

~Jess

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Hello! I'm writing two stories called Wanderer: Condemned and The Arcane Prequel: Corrode. They are sci-fi/ action and I'd love your support. If you want to fan or vote or comment that will be appreciated! Thank you! :)

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@Mojo_Smileyface

G'day!

While it's great that you're getting your book out there, would you please advertise in the Share your Story club? This is for workshop discussions. Cheers! Good luck with your story!

Jess

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@Pineapple2141 lol soz... yup ill do that :)

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http://www.wattpad.com/3147697-her-ultimate-desire-her-monotone-life-being-rocked looking for some pointers

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Thanks for Character Building lesson. It made me think about the people I know and their habbits, the way the talk, how the react to different situations.

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Um can any of you help me? i need an idea i'm stuck at this part in my book

if anyone wants to help just comment!

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The GodLess - The Mystery of the World Centuries ago, when Earth was not under the control of God, it was controlled by a cruel and heartless creature, called Neuron. Coming to our planet, God saw, how Neuron treated his subordinates. God and Satan decided to take to hands the authority on Earth. It was very difficult mission. God and Satan adapted all the people and their feelings. In XXI century a young man from a wealthy family found new potentials, that ancestors of humanity and Neuron had. It becomes to him what had happened centuries ago and behind it hunting of angels has begun. http://www.wattpad.com/3242943-the-godless-the-mystery-of-the-world

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@surenfant *Clears throat, nods head towards "Share Your Story" forums* Hint, hint.

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@surenfant

While it's great that you're getting your story out there, would you please advertise in the Share Your Story club? This discussion is for workshop-related comments. Thank you!

@ JackFinch Thanks :)

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please check out my awesome story! become a fan of me and i wil become a fan of u within 1 week after u becomin a fan of me! please support me! it is my life long dream to become a writer so please become a fan and feel free to write a comment thanks a mile! PEACE, LOVE and WRITING

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@abcmaybe123

Hey!

While it's great that you're promoting your story, could you please not do it here? This is a discussion for the workshop. If you want to advertise, go and do it in the Share your Story club.

And I would recommend that you don't do fan-trading, as this is unfair (and against Wattpad rules)

Cheers!

~Jess

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how do you tell when youve written over one page worth

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Hi guys.....

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@Oyi_miguel Hey! :D

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Read 'Lost confessions' :D

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Please READ! I don’t mean to be a bother; I just created a story and Im not very sure how wattpad works. It would be nice if you could check it out :D First Story of mine  Feedback would be nice. When childhood sweetheart Lillian Mayber moves back to Manticore –she realises not everything is the same| that not everyone is considered human... including herself. Paul Deen –a child who has lost everything. Everyone that has walked into his life, walked back out- has to fight his own urge to protect Lillian Mayber, to be near her no matter the consequences. But the closer they get the more danger they are in... Will Paul fight till the end or let Lillian walk away forever? Intense, Interesting story that is filled with supernatural beings and magical powers that transcend the universe. The plot reveals a natural world of humans over powered by a wider universe of supernatural beings where there is constant great interaction and warfare between mortals and immortals. -Thank you much appreciated http://www.wattpad.com/3470504-chronicles-of-the-wolves-chasing-moonlight-book-1

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