i'll critique anything but non-teen fiction, non fiction, historical fiction, spiritual, and classic


  • TheConfusion
    TheConfusion
    7 months ago

    I love reading and giving constructive critisism. I will read any of yourbooks as long as it isn't non-teen fiction, non-fiction, historical fiction,spiritual, and classic. If you post story in any of those categories i will ignore it so dont try.

    Post the link to a story of a friend or one you really like and I'll try to check them all out.

    Do not post your own story I'd love to read it but I don't want this discussion to be closed so please do not post your own story. If you really want me to read it, have friend post it for you or something. This is not a share your story club, thank you.

    Bookworm_wolf xx ;D

  • TheConfusion
    TheConfusion
    7 months ago

    thanks I'm a start reading it now. PS I freak in love Percy jackson @Abbzygail

  • TheConfusion
    TheConfusion
    7 months ago

    i read ur friends story and it was really good so i commented and voted on her story.

  • TheConfusion
    TheConfusion
    7 months ago

    i really want to read your story because it sounds very interesting but u will have to ask a friend to post ur story because this I not a story promotion discussion and I do not want thread to be closed so I ask you to remove ur comment and ask your friend to post the link if you want me to critique it, something u would have known if you read my first comment. @Sadness_Insanity

  • TheConfusion
    TheConfusion
    7 months ago

    @PeterG i really want to read your story because it sounds very interesting but u will have to ask a friend to post ur story because this I not a story promotion discussion and I do not want thread to be closed so I ask you to remove ur comment and ask your friend to post the link if you want me to critique it, something u would have known if you read my first comment.

  • _simplest
    _simplest
    7 months ago

    comment. I couldnt delete it.

  • TheConfusion
    TheConfusion
    7 months ago

    @simplest i really want to read your story because it sounds very interesting but u will have to ask a friend to post ur story because this I not a story promotion discussion and I do not want thread to be closed so I ask you to remove ur comment and ask your friend to post the link if you want me to critique it, something u would have known if you read my first comment.

  • _simplest
    _simplest
    7 months ago
  • TheConfusion
    TheConfusion
    7 months ago

    Okay this the third time this has happened. DO NOT POST YOUR OWN STORY! I do not want this thread to be closed so if you have to ask a friend to post it. This is not a story promotion there is a cub for that already the share your story club

  • TheConfusion
    TheConfusion
    7 months ago

    thank you it was an honest mistake but if you want me to critique yours then ask a friend please or email me in a private message just do not promote on this discussion please. And if i really like it i might vote fan comment fan or any of those @simplest

  • LuisRuedaflores
    LuisRuedaflores
    7 months ago

    when otherworldly creatures known as the Flood bring Kiri's city to ruins. it marks the start and rise of a dangerous alliance and the opportunity for Kiri to see her father once more. soon enough she uncovers a twisted destiny, but will it prove too much for her to handle?

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  • TheConfusion
    TheConfusion
    7 months ago

    @LuisRuedaflores i really want to read your story because it sounds very interesting but u will have to ask a friend to post ur story because this I not a story promotion discussion and I do not want thread to be closed so I ask you to remove ur comment and ask your friend to post the link if you want me to critique it, something u would have known if you read my first comment.

  • Bloody_Mary666
    Bloody_Mary666
    7 months ago

    @bookworm_wolf just so you know, this discussion won't be closed just because people are posting their own stories. The critiquing club is for people who want their OWN stories to be critiqued. It just seemed like you didn't know that, so I just wanted to clear it up. :)

  • TheConfusion
    TheConfusion
    7 months ago

    @imran_theauthor @werewolfe @MiNsHi @Rambiln_Red_Rose sorry i had a ton of home work and couldnt get on earlier but im on now and look foward to reading and critiqueing your story

  • TheConfusion
    TheConfusion
    7 months ago

    @Sadness_Insanity @LuisRuedaflores @PeterG my apologies, i didnt know that if you posted your ownstory it was okay in the critiqueing club but i will be reading them as soon as i can

  • TheConfusion
    TheConfusion
    7 months ago

    i read and commented on your story, nice writing @imran_theauthor

  • TheConfusion
    TheConfusion
    7 months ago

    read and commented on your story @werewolfe

  • Rambiln_Red_Rose
    Rambiln_Red_Rose
    7 months ago

    @bookworm_wolf

    No problem at all! I really enjoyed your critique and I hope that you will continue to read as more is posted!

  • TheConfusion
    TheConfusion
    7 months ago

    well you did very well @Rambiln_Red_Rose

  • TheConfusion
    TheConfusion
    7 months ago

    read commented enjoyed your story @Sadness_Insanity

  • werewolfe
    werewolfe
    7 months ago
  • TheConfusion
    TheConfusion
    7 months ago
  • TheConfusion
    TheConfusion
    7 months ago

    read your story and commented it was hilarious im going to finish it @PeterG

  • _imran_theauthor
    _imran_theauthor
    7 months ago

    @bookworm_wolf thank you so much i hope you continue reading .

  • TheConfusion
    TheConfusion
    7 months ago
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