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jessicaviana Joined: 2012-08-25 Posts: 890 |
8 months ago
YOU MUST READ THIS Ok so I saw a couple of games like this, and I don't know if they ever made any with trailers, so here it goes: You must rate the trailer of the person above you, saying if you like it, what you'd change, etc. And then you post your own and the link to your story ! HOW DO YOU GAIN READS? Well as you must rate the trailer of the person above you, at least one person will watch your trailer, and if they like it, perhaps they'll check your story right? (: You can enter AS MANY TIMES AS YOU WANT as long as you watch and rate the trailer of the person above you (: So I'll start with mine: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1990613-from-sam-to-lexi (: |
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JineeNguyen Joined: 2010-02-08 Posts: 189 |
8 months ago
@jessicaviana wow your trailer has a very high quality. And i love your choice of music and the dub, omg, where did you get it from? haha did you do a voice over or something or just cut it from a random movie? all in all, it was a really good and interesting trailer. Please also check out mine: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yc8Z7Vkt2OA And the link to my story: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1997456-twinderella-with-book-trailer-inside |
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EKShortstories Joined: 2012-04-26 Posts: 9269 |
8 months ago
Wow! On a scale of 1 - 10, I rate this a 7 :) Here is most recent one! Oops, wrong link, here's mine! |
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JineeNguyen Joined: 2010-02-08 Posts: 189 |
8 months ago
@EKShortstories wow your trailer looks good too. I'm checking out both of your stories! |
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jessicaviana Joined: 2012-08-25 Posts: 890 |
8 months ago
@JineeNguyen i got the dub from a short film i once found online and had saved on my computer (: your trailer is really intriguing and has great quality too ! I'm going to check your story out ♥ @EKShortstories I give your trailer an 8/10, I love that it's made out of probably old films shots (: Also going to check your story out ! So to keep the game going here's my trailer again: |
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jessicaviana Joined: 2012-08-25 Posts: 890 |
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zombie_love Joined: 2011-08-01 Posts: 543 |
8 months ago
@jessicaviana Unfortunately I don't know how to make trailers...but I just wanted to tell you that yours is really good!! 9/10 :) |
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1DGotDat1Thang Joined: 2012-08-03 Posts: 643 |
8 months ago
@jessicaviana ohmygawd you have so much skill hahahah my trailer sucks but here it is(: |
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SpeakingTruth Joined: 2012-03-15 Posts: 1575 |
8 months ago
@jessicaviana I LOved Yours, Espically how all the clips fitted perfectly together and made it interesting. I like how you didn't make it too long but not to short, and the quality of your clips were amazing. 9/10 @1DGotDat1Thang I liked yours alot, the only thing was I thought it went on for a little to long and became a little un-interesting near the end and a little bit at the start, but the video quality was very good and the clips you picked were well suiting. 6 1/2 /10 This was the first trailer I ever made, its pretty rough around the edges. Oh and please note that my old username was Ekstar thats why it says it in the trailer and on my book covers. |
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WorldofChances2GiveU Joined: 2012-02-08 Posts: 607 |
8 months ago
@speakingtruth The clip sizing was a little different and the music was little slow mid way in. But i liked it :) and the use of voice overs was a good touch! I've become stupid and forgotten how to embed a video so here is the link : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kqHJy0NPrLM |
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BetheLLe Joined: 2011-11-22 Posts: 2563 |
8 months ago
here's mine =) Ugh, can't link it to the story cuz my laptop is being retardedly slow. If you want to read it, come to my profile and click RIVEN =) |
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GraceR Joined: 2012-07-04 Posts: 211 |
8 months ago
Quality of the clips were excellent, and it was exciting. THe music was fitting. Transitions were appropriately placed. Overall I thought it earned an 8.5/10. Only deductions are because the clips didn't really vary between that many characters. I saw a good amount, but the clips didn't FOCUS around different characters for more than a clip or two. The ending was a bit quick. The clips, also, were all from the same movie. Which isn't bad, but doesn't add a lot of flavor to it, if you know what I mean. I'm a tough critic, trust me, so feel good that I didn't have more to say than just this much. It was actually really good, I'm just extremely tough. It's not the best, but I tried, so there it be. ;) |
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BetheLLe Joined: 2011-11-22 Posts: 2563 |
8 months ago
@GraceR Lol that's okay. It's my first trailer =) and I wanted to add diff movies, except they don't really fit to what my story talks about =) So i'm more needs to fit story. What program did you use to make your trailer? I use an online program lol |
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GraceR Joined: 2012-07-04 Posts: 211 |
8 months ago
First? Well, that changes it entirely. You did excellent, and yeah, I understand. I've had that problem before. I used iMovie. |
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BetheLLe Joined: 2011-11-22 Posts: 2563 |
8 months ago
@GraceR You're lucky. I only have a windows 7. know any free yet good program for download? And yeah, my first. Still suck at it trust me, practically had to do it for the whole night and I slept like a baby right after it was done like a baby. lol |
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GraceR Joined: 2012-07-04 Posts: 211 |
8 months ago
No, come now, you aren't terrible. I thought you were one of those people who think their trailers are super professional. Sorry to say I don't have any suggestions. Be careful if you go searching though. Don't become desperate because downloading just anything will earn you a terrible virus. |
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WorldofChances2GiveU Joined: 2012-02-08 Posts: 607 |
8 months ago
haha wow..um mine just got based over didn't it? :( oh well.. |
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Jillsvalentine Joined: 2012-03-19 Posts: 93 |
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Jillsvalentine Joined: 2012-03-19 Posts: 93 |
8 months ago
its the story of a Guy Neo Hawthrowne who is surviving with Painfull memories. He is a top fighter at illigel fight club. Handsome, shady and Mysterious. Girls are throwing themselvs on him yet he avoids them. One cold Night He meets a Girl : Jade......silent and afraid of everything. She is running away from Life. Two unkown people so different yet so similar....Neo discovers jade and his Life takes a New turn, Jade is frightened little kitten and Neo is feirce fighter. Opposite attracts but is it TRUE??? What is the memories that hurts NEO night after night?? What is JADE running from?? Her SILENCE Is something NEO can't stand...and JADE is too scared to be around a guy like HIM...but still destiny has their major plans....They are like 2 Parallel Lines which are meant to never meet...yet its in their destiny to be together...forever JADE is like Forbidden sin...and NEO is a Sinner.......COME FALL IN LOVE WITH THEM |
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GraceR Joined: 2012-07-04 Posts: 211 |
8 months ago
I'll rate it! I thought you did a good job on it, especially with the clips where they actually speak. I'm not a fan of fanfictions or anything like that with 1D or Taylor Swift, but I thought it was well put-together. 7/10 only because I didn't like the transitions and the online texting piece. I thought it looked a bit childish. I also disliked the clip with Taylor Swift whipping her head around, frankly I thought it was something out of the exorcist movies, lol! I'm not being mean, just blunt. Great job on the overall quality and what-not. Nicely done. Mostly the score is bias to be honest. If I was a huge fan of it, I'd probably give it a 9/10. |