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Blackrose821 Joined: 2012-07-16 Posts: 266 |
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TheOnlyHope Joined: 2012-08-23 Posts: 680 |
9 months ago
http://www.wattpad.com/6783459-stray-bullet http://www.wattpad.com/6784728-the-art-of-letting-go http://www.wattpad.com/6812388-loving-swiftly http://www.wattpad.com/6812877-the-day-i-surrendered-my-life-to-him PLS READ MY WORKS. THANK YOU! any comment will be much appreciated! :) |
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JonnyCastoArdern Joined: 2012-08-17 Posts: 328 |
9 months ago
Okay, everyone up til now has been read. If you've submitted more than one at a time, I haven't read all of them, but I might read more. Also, just FYI, everyone should read @Fox-Trot-9 if you haven't already. He is a genius. |
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writing_in_disguise Joined: 2012-02-26 Posts: 81 |
9 months ago
Here's one of mine! It's entered in the atty's! Check it out. http://www.wattpad.com/5405356-music-is-my-love-atty%27s-2012 |
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JonnyCastoArdern Joined: 2012-08-17 Posts: 328 |
9 months ago
Bumping this in case anyone's still interested - I have a bit of free time tonight. |
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hhesitate Joined: 2012-06-18 Posts: 2856 |
9 months ago
@JonnyCastoArdern Hi! I know you've read and commented on one of mine already and hope it isn't a bother if you can read another. The one titled Smoke. Thank you :) http://www.wattpad.com/5720296-in-a-world-full-of-noise-smoke-song-lyrics |
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cripchap Joined: 2012-08-12 Posts: 58 |
9 months ago
http://www.wattpad.com/story/2015911-power-of-a-kiss I would like to know what everyone thinks.. |
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IzzyHeartsOreos Joined: 2011-07-22 Posts: 809 |
9 months ago
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heavyhearted Joined: 2012-05-09 Posts: 772 |
9 months ago
@JonnyCastoArdern hello!! :) hope you like it!! :) http://www.wattpad.com/6170104-monster |
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iloveher420 Joined: 2011-09-11 Posts: 625 |
9 months ago
http://www.wattpad.com/6768518-emotion-driven-bittersweet-and-heartfelt-poetry this is my newest poem. thanks for reading! |
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ATLecy57 Joined: 2012-08-23 Posts: 23 |
9 months ago
Here is a few of mine please read and comment http://www.wattpad.com/6875719-the-forgotten-generation http://www.wattpad.com/6876443-la-saison-de-la-chasse-haut-sur-le-fil http://www.wattpad.com/story/1979461-the-last-of-the-harbinger |
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_MusicallyAcceptable Joined: 2012-02-14 Posts: 99 |
9 months ago
http://www.wattpad.com/story/1647397-poems I put all my poems on here to make it easier so you can take your pick or read all I've got so far or whatever you want C: Enjoy! |
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writer97 Joined: 2012-08-02 Posts: 23 |
9 months ago
Hi. I don't mind which you read, your pick :) http://www.wattpad.com/story/1849164-my-attys-collection-competitors Thanks :) |
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StarlightHaven Joined: 2011-05-04 Posts: 1116 |
9 months ago
@JonnyCastoArdern I'd be thrilled if you checked mine out. Im trying to think of ways to improve it |
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Fox-Trot-9 Joined: 2011-03-17 Posts: 2873 |
9 months ago
@JonnyCastoArdern I've read your sonnet, On Form, and your Monsters collection... And I must say, I'm quite impressed... You got a strong poetic voice and good ear for rhythm... |
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iRock2891 Joined: 2012-08-17 Posts: 57 |
9 months ago
If you dig humour and want to read something funny in poetry..do check my poem! :) http://www.wattpad.com/6760475-just-the-way-you-are-humor-mix http://www.wattpad.com/6717523-in-class http://www.wattpad.com/6705164-moo-me-maybe http://www.wattpad.com/6662147-l-o-v-e |
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knightwriter Joined: 2012-02-09 Posts: 93 |
9 months ago
if you still have some time, please read this poem from my atty's collection. Would love to get your feedback.. I read your sonnet which was well penned as a statement on structure and form in poetry. http://www.wattpad.com/3965767-atty-awards-2012-poetry-collection-alternating thanks. ~)K |
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JonnyCastoArdern Joined: 2012-08-17 Posts: 328 |
9 months ago
@knightwriter Hi, thanks for your comment! Really glad you liked 'On Form'. I was going to find one of yours to read - I'll read the one you linked when I've read the others from this thread. |
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knightwriter Joined: 2012-02-09 Posts: 93 |
9 months ago
thank you. Much appreciated. ~)K @JonnyCastoArdern |
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KITTYkat1234 Joined: 2011-04-01 Posts: 827 |
9 months ago
Here's my collection of poems. Enjoy! http://www.wattpad.com/story/607060-two-parts-of-my-mind-and-other-poems |
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cuzimquirky Joined: 2012-05-11 Posts: 40 |
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JonnyCastoArdern Joined: 2012-08-17 Posts: 328 |
9 months ago
Okay, I'm up to date on this thread. Hope everyone's happy with their comments so far! |
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Toomanynotes Joined: 2012-04-06 Posts: 42 |
9 months ago
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justbeinglittleme Joined: 2012-08-12 Posts: 10 |
9 months ago
Um, I've never written poetry before...and this is the closest thing I've got. I don't know what kind of poetry it would be considered, so I just call in free verse. It's called Kite Flying. I based it off of a group dance that I saw on Dance Moms. You do not have to like or even be interested in Dance Moms to read it, I didn't use any of the girls names, I just based characters off of them. Each part is in a different girls point of view. So, if you're interested here it is: http://www.wattpad.com/story/2023680-kite-flying thanks so much |
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KaceyJaceyXD Joined: 2011-06-05 Posts: 234 |
9 months ago
http://www.wattpad.com/2670010-poured-out-on-paper-last-tear-that-falls Thanks, in advance..(: |