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I'll Still Kick Your Ass [Werewolf/Humor]:

http://www.wattpad.com/4845924-i%27ll-still-kick-your-ass

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1687736-luxor

I live in a world called Luxor, and in this world, there are three types of people: Faults, Charmers and humans. I happen to be a Charmer... and apparently I'm also the type of person that can't catch a break. What would this story be if I wasn't? But we'll get to that later. Welcome to Luxor, and to my life... Emerson (Ember) Rose here, sixteen year old enemy of the government and currently, imprisoned in--for lack of a better term-- a concetration camp. But with the help of a couple friends, and possibly an entire underground secret rebel organization called the Lucins, I think I'm homefree. Until I realize my human father is on the run, my Charmer mother is dead, my government wants me dead and the only person I think I might be able to trust is none other than a Fault named Shade. Here in Luxor, I learn the valuable lesson of "everything is NOT what it seems..." All in all, I don't really think I know what I've gotten myself into.

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please critique me 2 stories. The first one is called One Direction and I and the second is called Staying with the Anderson's.

The summary of One Direction and I is After Sam Horan's parents die in a car crash. Sam has to go live with her cousin, teen heart throb Niall Horan.After she meets the guys of 1D. Band member Harry Styles catches her eye. Niall tells her not to fall for any of the guys. but she cant help but fall for Harry but doesnt want her cousin to get angry with her. she hides her feelings but little does she know that harry might feel the same way. If harry does fell the same way will Sam let herslf fall?

The link for One Direction and I is http://www.wattpad.com/story/1869692-one-direction-and-i

The summary for staying with the Anderson's is After Chloe's parents lose their jobs, they are forced to send Chloe away for a while with a family friends, Emma and Ryan. The catch is that Emma and Ryan have seven sons of their own on a Horse Farm in Texas. After something tragic happens, Chloe might never be able to return home. How will a New York City girl transition in a country gal? Will Chloe end up falling for any of the boys or will she find that their all arrogant asses? Find out in Staying with the Anderson's

The link for Staying with the Anderson's is http://www.wattpad.com/story/1902944-staying-with-the-anderson%27s

Thanks

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1964542-missing-in-paradise

Thanks. Hope I'm not too late :)

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1681319-the-masquerade

Genre savvy Mackenzie Kenison is far too curious for her own good. Once she gets the idea in her head that the supernatural might be something real, she searches obsessively for answers. But Mackenzie is finding out that knowing of the supernatural world is far less glamorous than anything the media would have you believe. Every action has consequences, and Mackenzie's actions changed her world practically overnight. Sometimes ignorance really is bliss, and being curious is just a way to get you killed. Mackenzie is about to find that out the hard way.

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http://www.wattpad.com/5688490-the-n-chronicles

In a world gone wrong, Where the monsters of our deepest nightmares have come alive.

One girl is on a journey to find Sanctuary in America.

This is the N chronicles.

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