Really looking for a fresh, great book

Hopefully the chapters aren't too short but not too long either (around five pages) and it's in early stages (ie - ten parts or less). Reccomend one of your own stories or someone elses, I don't mind I just need more books to read and send my love to :] Preferrabley no cliques or fanfictions, please!

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You Don't Have To read Chapter 5 As It's Like 10pages, But I'd Love For You To Check It Outt!<3

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1716030-titanic

Alice Carter, An insecure 18year old girl is from a rich family, they want to have a new life in America and so they go on the "unsinkable" Titanic. After the loss of her Aunt, she hasn't got close to anyone. Her parents and siblings aren't very close to her and her maid, Ruth, is her only friend. On her journey on the luxury cruise liner, she grows a bond with her Father again, finds love and makes a best friend, just to finally lose it all over again.

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@ashleesmurfie - Hi, the Essential Reads Club is for discussing Published works only rather than Wattpad stories (see the post at the top of the club), so I’ve moved your thread to the Wattpad Readers Club. Thanks for your understanding.

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@ashleesmurfie Try mine :) it fulfills the criteria :)

Check it out  :) (I hope you like it) After the murder of his parents, the orphaned Prince of Esyria is determined to seek revenge on the neighbouring country responsible for their death. The murder changes him. Overnight, Jase grows up, from a defenceless boy to a bitter man. After many years of training to improve his swordsmanship and physical strength, Jase decides he is ready to avenge the death of his parents. During his journey, he meets a high spirited and optimistic girl. Jase and Catherine are polar opposites. Jase is immediately attracted to Catherine and she shows him the meaning of life. Since the murder, Jase has never felt more alive. But what will happen when Catherine turns out to be the Princess of Bellerania? What would Jase do when he finds out that Catherine's parents are the reason his are dead?  http://www.wattpad.com/story/1581503-disguised-vengeance 

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@ashleesmurfie Lol, all of my chapters (minus the prologue) are five pages long, and I have ten chapters so far! :D Haha, anyway... if you're interested, here's my book:

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1789103-is-there-anyone-like-me-in-your-family

My newest story :) Hope you read it. (3-5 pgs)

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1152264-fatum

FATUM

There's a reason high school senior Athena Thorpe spends every available moment reading books: fiction is always so much better than the real world. Even the unexpected scandal she suffered thanks to Jackson Montgomery was just a blip in her typically mundane existence in Sparrow, North Carolina. But no story could ever compare to the life-altering events that occur when Gabriel Valente moves into town. Being the son of a notorious crime lord and having grown up on the streets of Manhattan, Gabriel defies all the expectations the students of Sparrow High have for him, including Athena's.

She never expected he would match her interest in the written word, or his unlikely grand gestures and definitely not the immediate but intense feelings which cause them to spiral into a secret relationship. A relationship that hinders on Gabriel's uncertain future, which could find him being the heir to the mob throne. Whether or not she wants to admit it, Athena knows the world Gabriel comes from is a dark and violent one. It's just really easy to pretend it doesn't exist within the bubble that is Sparrow. Yet, no matter how much we pretend, reality is never far away, with Gabriel and Athena learning a tragic lesson about choice and consequence a little too late.

When you finally decide what you want most in life, the next question becomes: will fate agree?

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http://www.wattpad.com/3378528-achieving-your-goals-watty-awards-2012-prologue

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1109621-the-rebirth-of-indigo-caeli

The crowd was silent and all staring at the woman as they realized there was no room for rebellion if you wanted to make it out alive. Even though all their faces were expressionless, I could see the hope in their eyes fade with each word the bald woman spoke. I really didn't think much of this, at the time I held the same opinion as most of the country: They know what they did, they did it on purpose, and they deserve to die by the hands of their own. Looking back on it however, it was heartbreaking. Even though all these people have no chance to make anything out of their lives, they still wanted to live. Life was the only thing they had left in the world and they couldn't even keep that. How could we do that to other human beings? Yes they have committed some of the most hated, disgusting acts that have ever been conceived, maybe they have taken the life of someone's child or a lover, maybe they have caused someone to suffer through terrible pain and have gained the hatred of society as a whole, but when we let that hatred get the best of us is when we become the monsters. The Execution was simply an act of rejection of what we can become being exposed by those who have become something we consider to be terrible and beyond our capacities. We simply don't want to accept the reality of what we could be, that is why the Execution continued for as long as it did. I wish that the world had realized this sooner, but the government suppressed these ideas and truths for its own gain. In retrospect, they were the real monsters.

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July Raine

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1590086-july-raine

When Melonie Mitchell was sixteen years old she fell in love with Rainey. They had no hope of ever making their relationship work because they came from two different worlds. This wasn't your typical summer romance, there were no grand gestures, no professions of love, and in the end they made no promises to see one another again. Six weeks later Melonie found out a lot came out of that summer romance, and it may have been more than she bargained for. For years after that summer, Melonie made many attempts to find Rainey, but she never did. Not until six years later, at least. Suddenly her life is turned upside down again at the same place they had met years before. Six years ago it was supposed to be a summer fling where no promises were made. Will Rainey step up the the consequences of that summer, or will he leave once again without a promise of a future? Sometimes love isn't what you thought it was, and maybe the second time around July Raine could change them both.

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1786412-the-classy-shy-girl

Sarah is 25 year-old woman who has never properly been in love. On a random night out at a bar, she stumbles across Frank who she hardly remembers but is offered on a date. The first date isn't awkward thanks to Frank's confident personality and shy girl Sarah goes home thrilled.

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http://www.wattpad.com/5058636-straight-in-a-crooked-world

At Solae High School, Jason is the nobody. He is suddenly judged when he is revealed to be straight in a prominently gay world. Mason see's Jason as a disgusting person. Ashlia only sees her love for him. Ashlia and Jason leave their lives only to be sucked into hell. Now they're under Mason's control. They will try to escape...but will they succeed? @ashleesmurfie

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Here's a story I've been editing. It's an amazing story, very creative and people who enjoy fantasy stories will really love it!

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1910393-horizon-falls

Avery is just a normal sixteen-year-old girl who spends her summers hanging out with her best friend Dan, attending parties, and wandering through the grey city streets. That is, until her family suffers a vicious and deadly attack that she can’t even remember happening, and she doesn’t understand how she escaped unscathed. She is then forced to live with her grandmother in a beautiful, seemingly perfect village in the middle of the English countryside. But things aren’t what they seem… and she’s drawn into another life by the sexy, but mysterious village kids. Does she except her new life, or fight to uncover the truth, so she can return to her old life?

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I have one for you dear it's on my page and it's called Wings check it out if you like!

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I don't know how you'll like it, but here's mine :)

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Oliver Ashford. Hope St. James.

They weren't friends.

They weren't lovers.

But towards the end, they kind of had something special.

Then she was gone.

She was gone and Oli couldn't sleep at night.

She was gone and no other girl could compare.

She was gone and everything was falling apart.

Oli had to bring her back.

Oli had to raise the dead.

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@ashleesmurfie http://www.wattpad.com/6501266-the-fighter :)

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1894259-tame-me-pharaoh

Lilly Night is a normal teenager that comes to find that she has special cat-like powers including nine lives, enhanced speed, strength, hearing, agility, night vision and the ability to transform, along with the ability to see the past, present, and future. She goes on to uncover that she is a descendant of an ancient race called the Mau. She discovers she has nine lives and is told by Val and Jonah that she alone can protect the race from human assassins, who have hunted them for thousands of years. @ashleesmurfie

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@ashleesmurfie SHORT STORY entered for Watty Awards 2012

You know that girl you called fat? She’s been starving herself for God knows how long.

You know that chick you called emo? She’s been battling depression for years.

You know that gal you bullied and whenever she would cry you would say “Aww is little Missy going to go cry to her mommy and daddy?” Her parents died a couple years ago and she’s still grieving their death.

The tiniest thing can hurt a person beyond words, but it can also shed light to a dark tunnel. This is Missy Vega’s story about loss, hurt, betrayal and hope.

Fiona Love is her school’s head cheerleader. However, don’t let her looks and her social status fool you; she’s far from the stereotypical dumb blond bimbo. She’s dangerous. She could kill you in less than thirty seconds. Under that popular girl façade is one of the most feared and respected gang leaders, Fire. She hasn’t been the same ever since HE left, several years ago. Suddenly, there’s a mysterious new boy in school and her world is turned upside down.

Damon Storm is leader to a well-known gang called the Bloody Skulls. He has the power, the money, the girls. He’s not a guy you want to cross roads with. He’s cruel and heartless ever since SHE left. Then, when he has to go to a new school because of some issues, there’s a certain girl that piques his interest.

What happens when two of the most powerful gang leaders are attracted to each other? Will things take a turn for the best, or for the worst?

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@ashleesmurfie http://www.wattpad.com/3765514-chicago-mafia

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@ashleesmurfie Heyyy guys!! I'm @FolasewaIdowu's promoter! She's really good! Please read and comment on all chapters especially the fourth one. Please don't stop reading because the first chapter is a little bit tacky. it gets better i've been told. Don't forget to vote if you like it! If you could fan her that would be great!

Here's the link:http://www.wattpad.com/story/1541482-stuck-on-you

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Past, Present and Future Me.

http://www.wattpad.com/6065409-past-present-and-future-me-chapter-1-peak-at-the

The past of Ziara Blue lies in the house she lived for the 20 years of her life. The present is the 28 year old her visiting the place for one last goodbye. The present is her going back to her life and living it like she always did. The only thing missing is her best friend who passed away 5 years ago, leaving Ziara hanging with an untold secret. Lucky for Ziara a twist takes place. What's the twist? Does she find a new friend? Or maybe she finds out the secret? And what's her future? Well to know that, read on.

This story is completed; it’s only 5 chapters long. Thanks for reading and hope you like it!! :D

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My friends story. I haven't come across one like this on wattpad, it's really unique! She is an amazing writer. Hope you give it a read :)

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1117263-celestial-equator

If you're into music and Romance: http://www.wattpad.com/5637684-beat-me-a-song-description

If you like mystery: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1918897-spear-to-the-heart#

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"Can you just give me the freaking chess piece?!" I gave up trying to be calm, and snapped at Nate with crossed arms.

"Not until you get up there and sing." He smirked, a microphone extended towards me in his outstretched hand.

Grumbling to myself, I took a calming breath. I pinched the bridge of my nose and counted to ten. Come on, do it for Spades.

"Give me that mic." I muttered, snatching it from his hands.

Avery was devastated when her best friend Spades moved. She dated, and tried to move on, but no one could replace him. After her breakup with her recent boyfriend she discovers a chess piece attached with a puzzle piece and a folded note. There is a silver of hope when she recognizes her best friend's writing. Will these pieces lead her to finding her best friend? Throw in a jock who Avery had sparked his interest, and a jeck who reminds her of Spades... (I'm pretty bad at blurbs so don't let this put you off! D:)

http://www.wattpad.com/6356347-pieces-to-finding-you-watty-awards-2012-pieces-to

Check it out if you have time?(:

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@ashleesmurfie http://www.wattpad.com/story/1365423-unexpected-world-of-love i need a honest comment .. since that i edited a half of it. honestly chapter 1-3 but then if you like to continue reading, its fine but i hope you give chance reading through it..

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