FanFiction critique thread - Apply now! *We're also OPEN for requests*


  • StarlightHaven
    StarlightHaven
    9 months ago

    Hello! Basically I've realised that no one really critiques fanfictions - granted a lot of us just write it for fun but I do know some people are serious about writing FanFiction so i want to start a critique thread for a variety of FanFiction sub-genres.

    I will need

    - 4 more critique people for ANY KIND OF FANFICTION

    Let me know if I have missed any other kind of fanfiction I just cant remember anymore at the moment. You have to be DEDICATED. If this thread gets busy you're going to have to keep up but if it gets too busy then I will hire more people. You don't have to read the ENTIRE story but you need to read enough to get more of a sense of the story and where it's headed.

    Here's the form:

    Name:

    Experience:

    Type of fanfiction (if not listed above please specify):

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    You will also need to PM me a SHORT example

    Team so far:

    @SnapeShipper394 - Severus Snape Fanfics

    @StarlightHaven - Harry Potter, Doctor Who, Sherlock, Rumbelle and Rush!belle Fanfics

    @OneOriginalThing1 - One Direction FanFics

    @sassmax - One Direction & Hunger Games FanFics

    @JS2109 - Teen Wolf & Vampire Diaries FanFics

    Want your Fanfic critiqued?

    Reply to someone on the team with the title of your Fanfic and a summary via this thread

  • StarlightHaven
    StarlightHaven
    9 months ago

    before you do your first critique, it'd be a good idea to read this:

    http://www.wattpad.com/forums/discussion/385613/Critic+Tips

    they know what they're talking about and have managed to put it into words when I couldn't.

    It'll help you in the long run.

  • StarlightHaven
    StarlightHaven
    9 months ago
  • EsmeraldaSnarkle
    EsmeraldaSnarkle
    9 months ago

    G'day there!

    Ummm...I'll just fill in the form shall I?

    Name: The Missing Diary

    Experience: A few years, mostly just for fun.

    Type of fanfiction: Harry Potter, Next Gen, Oneshot, Rose/Scorpius, Albus/OC

  • _Melody_Pond
    _Melody_Pond
    9 months ago

    @StarlightHaven hello

    Name- in my dreams

    Experience- er well I wrote one a few months back about sethig else and then one for a contest and this is my third attempt. So not much experience

    Type of fanfiction- doctor who

  • _Melody_Pond
    _Melody_Pond
    9 months ago

    @eva_finiarel Hello I went on your profile to read your story and found you are a fellow slytherin.

  • StarlightHaven
    StarlightHaven
    9 months ago

    @Melody_Pond @eva_finiarel Thanks for applying I will need a short example of what your critiques are like so it'd be great if you could PM them to me

  • StarlightHaven
    StarlightHaven
    9 months ago

    bump NEED MORE APPLICANTS

  • StarlightHaven
    StarlightHaven
    9 months ago
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    StarlightHaven
    9 months ago
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    StarlightHaven
    9 months ago
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    StarlightHaven
    9 months ago
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    StarlightHaven
    9 months ago
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    StarlightHaven
    9 months ago
  • StarlightHaven
    StarlightHaven
    9 months ago

    @eva_finiarel Hired. Your critique was really good :)

  • EsmeraldaSnarkle
    EsmeraldaSnarkle
    9 months ago

    @StarlightHaven

    Ahaha thank you :). Just tell me where to start. ;p

  • StarlightHaven
    StarlightHaven
    9 months ago
  • RemyMilatos
    RemyMilatos
    8 months ago

    Name: Laura-Jayne.

    Experience: Off wattpad, for about a year or so. On wattpad, none.

    Type of fanfiction (if not listed above please specify): I'd like to do Teen Wolf and Vampire Diaries fan-fiction. @StarlightHaven

  • StarlightHaven
    StarlightHaven
    8 months ago

    @LHOECHLIN Sure just send me a quick sample of your work

  • StarlightHaven
    StarlightHaven
    8 months ago
  • RemyMilatos
    RemyMilatos
    8 months ago

    @StarlightHaven Okay, I'm just going to choose one I done last night :)

  • StarlightHaven
    StarlightHaven
    8 months ago

    @LHOECHLIN Okay I'm open to having a few people interning, if you want to be in this thread there will b a couple of things I will need you to work on. The first thing is making it clear when you are quoting their story and when you are telling them how they could have done it better. When you tell them they have mistakes be a bit more specific as to what those mistakes are for example: are they spelling mistake? Grammar? Does one sentence contradict another? Just telling them they have mistakes won't help them if they dont know what they are.

  • _keabirdy
    _keabirdy
    8 months ago

    @StarlightHaven Good luck with this! (:

  • RemyMilatos
    RemyMilatos
    8 months ago

    @StarlightHaven Okay. Thanks for the useful tips I'll be sure to remember them :)!

  • StarlightHaven
    StarlightHaven
    8 months ago

    @LHOECHLIN So you're in then?

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ChangingFace  4 months ago
sassmax  4 months ago
EsmeraldaSnarkle  9 months ago
rebel_with_a_voice  8 months ago
NvrBeenToNandos  3 months ago
RemyMilatos  8 months ago
SnapeShipper394  3 months ago
_OneOriginalThing1  4 months ago
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TwinPeacock  4 months ago
emjosh  8 months ago
_GetInLine  8 months ago
Idk_Im_A_Fangirl  8 months ago
StarlightHaven  3 months ago
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_keabirdy  8 months ago
_Melody_Pond  8 months ago
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