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Name : Guns and Roses Genre : Romance Alexis is a part of the most notorious gang in the city. A drug raid goes wrong one day and she accidentally stabs a member of their enemy gang. The guy survives but her life turns into hell. Now, she has been given two months to change herself. To change her life. Go back to High school, get good grades, good friends and avoid courting trouble. She plans to take the easy way out and force the nerdiest student in the school to do her work. But trouble stirs when the school nerd turns out to be Ned Baxtor, the only goody-two-shoes in the history of nerds who turned out to be the school heart throb as well. What will she do to get out of this mess of gang revenge, violence, betrayal and maybe, unrequited love? http://www.wattpad.com/story/1403696-guns-and-roses Thanks so much !!!!

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please read, i never get any feedback, so i was wondering if it was any good or not! http://www.wattpad.com/story/1647289-who-will-it-be

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Jinxed (Horror/Paranormal)

Jens Bronte was popularly known as Jinx, due to her horrible and never ending bad luck. Daring and playful, Jinx one day decides to pay the old, abandoned Mortem Street a night-time visit. When her best friend, Scarlett, brings along their attractive and handsome friend, Jinx is more determined to remain unafraid and bold.

The trio set out on a spooky adventure into an old mansion, with an Ouija board, and end up awakening something unpleasant from its deep slumber - and it is not happy. Finding themselves in a dangerous and deadly situation, the three of them attempt to make their way out ... hopefully, alive.

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1570741-jinxed

Off to check out your stories, thanks :)

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Name: Straight in a Crooked World Genre: Teen fiction Deacription:

http://www.wattpad.com/5058636-straight-in-a-crooked-world

The world as we see it...or maybe it should be the gays as we see them! In a world where the population is prominently gay heterosexuality can cause conflicts. It did for these two! A nobody at Solae High - Jason suddenly finds himself the center of unwanted attention when the people of his world find out his preference! Unbeknownst, pulled to an old friend- Ashlia and her to him...these two find themselves against the world of homosexuals. As if life was easy with Mason bullying Jason to no ends he now had to suffer the scrutiny of his friends and classmates for choosing someone inappropriate? But was it really? Pushed against a wall with no way to escape these two teenagers stand to fight back for the person they love and who love them back just the same...but will they succeed?

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1582464-protect-you Werewolf/Romance Dean Sullivan is an successful Alpha,and has not found his mate yet,but he finds his mate in his cousin's wedding.His mate is Emily Stanley but she has a deadly sad past and she does not belive in mates.How will Dean make Emily belive in mates and make her fall in love with him and the most difficult job to manage his pack ,contol himself from claiming her and control his lust for her Thanks :D

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Name: Saving Caylin

Genre: Paranormal, Mystery

Description: Bailee Savage is sick and tired of living with her parents. She finds that it is about time to move on and live on her own. Leaving her family and home town she moves to Caylin a cozy small town just off of the west coast of Canada. She knows no one and is unfamiliar with the place but is determined to make it work.

But after spending a little time there she meets Emery. A tall lanky blond with such an amazing tale. If she could only remember it.

Link >>>> http://www.wattpad.com/story/1787150-saving-caylin

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Link: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1679259-whenever-you-remember-book-1

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TITLE: Save me

AUTHOR: xboookloverx

GENREs: teenfiction/ romance

LINK: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1391114-save-me

SUMMARY: a story about a girl who is being treated as part of a buisness deal. but who is making this deal? what do they want from her? and most importantly, how many betrayals can she face?

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Name: Cinderella's Revenge

Genre: Adventure/Romance

Description: ‘Life isn’t all that you expect. Sometimes it decides to swerve into a dark and sinister alley and it takes a while to escape into the big, bright world we call Earth. You sometimes need to make painful decisions in your life and sacrifice them in order to achieve what you want.’ – Excerpt from Vivian Banks/Rebecca Churchie’s Diary

Vivian was always a mysterious but cunning girl. She was ruthless yet also kind but when it’s revenge we’re talking about, well, let’s just hope you don’t get on her bad side. If only they knew what they were getting themselves into earlier, they might still be alive long enough to go to her 19th birthday party… if they were that lucky. She had planned this for almost as long as she can remember but she never anticipated them to be shattered by someone who she had never expected. Someone who she shouldn’t have started to fall for.

And here's the link if you want it :)

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1582412-cinderella%27s-revenge

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@wendythestoryteller loved ur covers. Fanned u.. and started reading the story. :D

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@wendythestoryteller loved ur covers. Fanned u.. and started reading the story. :D

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http://www.wattpad.com/5802581-having-a-chance-at-life-prologue Hi i would love your honest opinion thanks (:

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@SonaliBijnanSaha Hi here's mine.

Title: His Dark Side Genre: Teen Fic Summary: No one is what they seem. http://www.wattpad.com/story/1709292-his-dark-side

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@SonaliBijnanSaha Hello! I've got two stories you can check out if you'd like :) Thank you!

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1493711-head-over-heels Name: Head Over Heels Genre: Fantasy/Romance Description: What's the best thing to do when you discover that your beloved big brother has been murdered by a vampire? For Aaren, it was easy; you go after the son of a sucker and give him a piece of your mind. With a gun. And after weeks of devoted research and death threats to the towns delinquent vampire population Aaren finally has the vampire cornered. All she has to do is pull the trigger. But things doesn't really turn out the way she had played it out in her head.

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1622134-memento-mori Name: Memento Mori Genre: Paranormal/Romance Description: You have heard tales about life, but have you heard the tale about Death? This tale will tell the story of Death and how he discovers his mortal emotions. A curious case awakens his interest and when he comes eye to eye with the human Alice, something deep inside of them both starts to surface.

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Name: The Lordly Ones

Genre: Fantasy\Adventure

Description: In the present day, a group of teenagers flee across the woodland at the pace of the North wind. They are hiding, desperate to get back. Get back where? It's hard to remember. As Hunters track them through a world they don't know it is easy to forget who they are and learn who they are to become. Determined to find their missing friend and escape the hands of creatures they didn't know existed they must trust each other. However will what first brought them together pull them apart?

Link: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1383239-the-lordly-ones

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1530761-the-path-to-sepren

Genre: Sci-fi/Fantasy/Fiction (Post-Apocalyptic)

Emile Guarder is a twenty-sum year old man with a mission. Get to Sepren, otherwise known as 'the city within walls.' The only problem? He has to get through cannibals, the undead and creatures he's never seen before to get there and he needs help. With a group of individuals with the same goal in mind, they might just be able to stand a chance.

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1540425-the-last-hunt

Hunting meant everything to Ruin. It wasn't just his job; it was a way of life. Training his entire life to catch criminals. Slowly building a reputation as one of the best Bounty Hunters in the world, and finally joining the two best hunters in the world. Everything was perfect... Perfect things never last. Some despised the hunters, but one hated them above all. As his plan begins to unfold. Hunters become the hunted. Can Ruin and his friends save themselves and many others? Or will this be the last hunt?

Thanks! I hope you enjoy!

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1750127-alter-ego-%C2%A9-watty-awards-2012

Name: Alter Ego

Genre: Mystery, Suspense, Romance

Description: As soon as Lisa bought the first edition of The Strange Case of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde, her life started changing. Each morning she would awake to find things in her apartment, whether they were jewels or bank notes, without remembering what had happened the night before.

Soon she finds out that a certain someone has plans to end the world... herself, or rather her alter ego. As Lisa soon takes on the role of jekyll and hyde from a curse placed on the very book. Will she be able to stop the person who knows thwe most about her, her worst nightmare....herself.

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Oops, double post sorry xD

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http://www.wattpad.com/1259288-betrayed

Name: Betrayed

Genre:Teen/ Adventure

Description:Find out what really happened. Alex Johnson has been living an average life while coping with his father's death years ago. A traumatic memory. But for the first time, things start looking up, Alex has met the girl of his dreams. But things go downhill from there, he learns his mother has lost custody over him and he will be orphaned. Among this chaos, Alex finds a clue concerning his father's work and death. With nothing to lose, Alex leaves the life he has known and leaves to find the truth of his father's death

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@SonaliBijnanSaha Name: How to be Famous Description: JJ is a wallflower, never attracting attention. She didn't have too high expectations: survive high school and go on to college. She definitely didn't want to become a model! With no experience whatsoever, she took a chance and took a job as a model. Being a model sounds glamorous, but in real life it was hard, and you were expected to be available at all times. Suddenly, her best friend was her worst enemy and her old mortal enemy is her boyfriend? Not to mention the cute boy that chauffeurs her.....

Please check it out! Link: http://www.wattpad.com/3857367-how-to-be-famous

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Here's my book

http://www.wattpad.com/1259288-betrayed

Teen/ Adventure

Find out what really happened. Alex Johnson has been living an average life while coping with his father's death years ago. A traumatic memory. But for the first time, things start looking up, Alex has met the girl of his dreams. But things go downhill from there, he learns his mother has lost custody over him and he will be orphaned. Among this chaos, Alex finds a clue concerning his father's work and death. With nothing to lose, Alex leaves the life he has known and leaves to find the truth of his father's death

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Name: Princess of Prophecy Genre: Fantasy Link: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1304580-princess-of-prophecy-prophecy-book-1

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Bulletproof Love

http://www.wattpad.com/6294202-bulletproof-love-prologue

What would you do if your town is over run with vampires? What would you do if your boyfriend disappeared? What would you do if this happened on the same day? This problem is tearing Arianna apart more and more each second, all she can do is search the streets and control her new lust for blood without tearing some innocent person's throat out. Whilst trying to learn this new skill of control, the two vampires who changed her, Jade and Aaron, are coming after her to recruit her for the Rebel army, who are fighting against the Sovereigns.

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Name: The Discovered

Genre: novel, adventure, drama

description: A young man follows his departed father's footsteps when he join's a historical voyage to earth's twin planet...but the spaceship crashes and leaves him stranded with two others...one a spy for Russia.

http://www.wattpad.com/6354910-below-are-the-first-4-chapters-of-my-novel-the

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