Anybody with a good mystery/suspense story?!??!

@maybe_tommorow69 7 friends get picked for Fear Factory. You are locked in a room of a factory with your biggest fear for one day. Then you go to the next room, which holds someone else's biggest fear for a day, and so on, for seven days. All the time you hold the key to get out of the room, but if you leave, you will die within seven days. Whoever lasts all seven days, gets a prize of 1 million dollars. Can you survive?

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1427055-fear-factory

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/693486-getting-away-with-murder This is mine. It's got only 3 chapters till now, but I assure you, it won't disappoint you. Just give it a read. :)

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1405778-everything-to-me

Everything to me It could have been in anyother High School, but of course, it had to be theirs. Dallas, Bryony and Olivia are all caught in their own lies and secrets, when finally things spin out of control and someone they know dies. Who is the culprit? Two of them are trying to find out while the third one is trying to get away... which one is which? You'll have to read to find out...

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http://www.wattpad.com/5068318-the-secluded-7 my secluded 7!! :D

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http://www.wattpad.com/5074892-curses-and-cornfields-excerpt

Hey guys, check out the mystery novel I'm working on! I'm experimenting with some different concepts and would love your feedback.

It's about a boy who moves to middle-of-nowhere Kansas and gets involved in a rather complex town mystery involving the disappearance of a family.

I've uploaded 3 chapters so far. Please let me know what you all think! Thanks (:

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Hey guys i'm starting my first story here at wattpad... Yehey!!! Why dont you take a look at it and leave your comments or any suggestions that you may give to me as a beginner. I would gladly appreciate it. And please be my fan,,, I'll be your fan too in return... My goal is not just to make stories but as well as make friends here（＾_＾） http://www.wattpad.com/story/1483879-the-tea-party

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@maybe_tommorow69

http://www.wattpad.com/story/839801-the-catastrophic-encounter

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I'm writing one called 'The "Human" Being' I'm only up to chapter 5 and they're only about 3 pages long. I don't know if it is what you're looking for though hehe

http://www.wattpad.com/2374282-the-human-being-chapter-one

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Hi I have written a old fashioned who don it detective story called Taddio, I think you might like it http://www.wattpad.com/5128818-taddio#!p=1

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1280916-finders-keepers ya'll should read it. its just a start though

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Unnatural (Watty Awards 2012)

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1536728-unnatural-watty-awards-2012

Macy Roman feels like she's different, knows that she is, but still lives her life as usual. The days never change, the same routine repeats over and over. But suddenly, the people she's around slowly start to disappear. The bullies at school, anybody who she doesn't like- gone. Macy's not normal, she knows this, but could she also be involved with the strange disappearances going on in her quiet small town?

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Hi, I have written an old fashioned "Who Done It?" book called 'Taddio" It follows the adventures of a great detective who has become old and rather over weight and the apprentice he is training to replace him the lovely Constable Constance Blackwell. The first chapter is an orientation, after that each chapter is a stand alone mystery that they solve. If you love a Detective tale or two then this is for you http://www.wattpad.com/story/1502633-taddio

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Smile - A Novella

Nina is dead.

Toby always knew that his town was fit for a murder mystery. Small, isolated Brookview is one of those places where nothing bad ever happens. It was only a matter of time, really.

He just never thought that it would be Nina.

He never wanted it to be Nina.

http://www.wattpad.com/story/832997-smile-a-novella

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http://www.wattpad.com/3835973-a-veneer

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LIFELINES (A Zombie Epic)

A Policeman is haunted by a headless ghost who urges him to find her killer.

http://www.wattpad.com/5300950-lifelines-a-zombie-epic-the-prologue

This is a science fiction, mystery, horror, and psycho-thriller…

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1562034-district-zero TITLE: DISTRICT ZERO GENRE:THRILLER DISCRIPTION: "If you're reading this, don't stand there, run while reading it. Run to your nearest train station. Take a train about a mile across the southern border of Navada and into the state of Arizona. I don't know my exact coordinates at this time, though I know I'm somewhere between two rocky hills that stand five miles apart.They don't sell tickets to the location of my current whereabouts, so just get off at District Zero and get me out of here! But be careful around the people here. They have secrects. They hide them from you until they gain your trust, and then they'll turn on you. They don't like strangers. Hence, be armed when you arive and kill every last one of them, after which you will find me. I can't promise you I'll still be alive by then, so please, make haste!

Your friend, Simian Lynch"

I only have one chapter up so far, but I hope you enjoy it none-the-less! Please tell me what you think and I'll return the favor (:

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hi, ive wrote the plot of my mystery/suspence/horror story, plz can u read the plot and the suspects, plz can u give me your thoughts about what i have written so far!!! thnx

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1631657-fragmented

This story is a mystery. It's told by a young woman, Evelyn, who works at a nursing home and discovers a journal that this mysterious woman leaves behind when she passes away. This journal holds many secrets that may involve Evelyn, herself.

Let me know what you think! i've only done one chapter, and it's quite short :)

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Title: L.I.A.R.S

Link: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1598996-l-i-a-r-s

Summary: Lucy Marshall was the golden girl at Redeleigh High School, she had everything; amazing friends, a great boyfriend, the perfect family but it all started to fall apart. Could one guy and three unexpected friends help her through it? Or will she continue with her lies?

Ivy Monroe was the ex-golden girl at Redeleigh High School, she was perfect, but suddenly, after one weekend, everything changed. She changed. Nobody knows what happened, not even her mother. Will she ever confide in her three new friends and one guy with her deep secret? Or will she continue with her lies?

Alyssa Summers was the up-tight perfectionist at Redeleigh High School. Everything in her life had to be perfect. But nothing in her life was perfect. She was always trying to fix things and make them perfect. Will her imperfect three friends and one guy help her? Or will continue with her lies?

Riley Craft was the player at Redeleigh High School. Boys were her escape from what was an awful life, in her opinion. When her dad told her shocking news, she reacted in a selfish way. Will she finally accept her dad's happiness? Will three unwanted friends and one guy help her? Or will she continue with her lies?

But these four liars weren't just friends on their own nor were they such big liars.

When someone murders their ex-boyfriend, Sam Evans, they're devastated. The police hadn't found out who the murder was so the girls decided to take matters in their own hands and find out who this heartless killer is. Together. With crazy lives, will they ever be able to find out who this killer is? And what if the killer is smarter than they think? What if the killer has a plan for them?

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@maybe_tommorow69 Just stared so their is only a slight mystery so far...

http://www.wattpad.com/5588028-freak http://www.wattpad.com/5588028-freak

http://www.wattpad.com/5588028-freak

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@maybe_tommorow69

What if you woke up one day, and everything you knew was gone? What if your parents disappeared, your friends vanished, and your house was torn apart? What if no one was around except for the children? What if you had to take care of twelve children when you were only sixteen? And what if you couldn't remember what happened or why? What would you do? http://www.wattpad.com/5530969-where-have-all-the-children-gone?d=ud

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Here's mine: It's something different, I assure you.

(click the image to read)

Short Description:

Chiddy. A 15-year old Nigerian boy has his life turned 180 degrees around on his 15th birthday. Once living a very peaceful life with wealthy parents Chima and Adaeze, he discovers the bleak side of life after an explosion struck his residential home with claims of his mom and dad as the only victims. . .Chiddy must now find away to deal with his new life. A life now filled with endless surprises. A life of an orphan. A life "They" must not let him live. A life "They" choose to capture. Alongside Sani, Nicole, and Amy, Chiddy must know who "They" are and bring them down.

Thanks a lot.

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1617601-in-the-end Supervisory special agent James Kengly is working the case that could make, or break his career in the FBI. A serial killer is on the loose and it's up to him, and a select few agents to catch him. The profile is weak and without a proper witness they don't think they'll be able to identify him.

Finally, they get the break in the case they need. The serial killer had struck again, only this time the victim survived. There's only one problem. The witness is blind.

James was raised right. Now that this women need protection, he and his colleagues are going to make sure that they're the ones to do it.

Melody Carrmen doesn't want or need the protection of an agent. Even if his voice melts over her like chocolate. She's independent and she's going to damn well make sure things stay that way.

The killer doesn't appreciate that his victim got away. Even if it takes him the rest of his life he's going to make sure she doesn't say a word to the police, or anyone ever again.

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1718552-my-spirit%27s-keeper My story is a mystery suspense

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http://www.wattpad.com/story/1003787-misty-waters i hope you like it :)

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